Reviews For Family Punishment
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Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2017 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray

I love your story and your awesome chapter contributions at Writing.com. Your stuff involving a tiny son being engulfed by the powerful and stinky feet of his family, especially his mom, is great. I'd love to see this son eventually shrink away to nothing from smelling his mom's feet. He'd just be sweat and scrunched away.

Author's Response:

I think you have me confused with someone else.  I do know what you are referring too though.  This story was inspired by some of those chapters but with my own twist on it.  I had read Writing.com and (with that author's permission) wanted to bring a story like that to here as I had noticed there weren't really any like it here.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2017 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray

Please add some giantess booty!! Lol and I LOVE how this story is going and how it's set up! FM/m is awesome. And it's his own family. Since he's so different from them it would be even better if he found out he wasn't related to them at all 😂😂😂. But please add giantess butt 😍🍑

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I'm glad you're liking it so far.  We'll see, haha.

Reviewer: SilentStep Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2017 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray

Really great start. Keep going!



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: zazix Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2017 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray

Wow man. Just Wow. I like this kind of stories so much when someone becomes the tiny of his family. Love the footplay so much! I hope he Will be the slave of all the family members ;)  



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. The whole family is going to get involved with him soon as I plan to have him encountering all of them.

Reviewer: Pdawg2431 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2017 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: Best Laid Plans Often Go Astray

Love this already. I hope you don't just concentrate on feet bit this is an excellent start. Bravo. 



Author's Response: Thanks for the review, glad you like it. It's probably going to center around him at his family's feet but I'll try my best to include more than just feet.

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