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Reviewer: SerialKillerStatus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2022 10:20 PM Title: B&E

This is one of if not the first size stories I ever read back on deviantart. It's still so fucking good god damn. 

Reviewer: daftpunk Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2017 4:49 PM Title: B&E

really good read! hope you keep the unaware interaction going as long as possible before the other robbers are found!

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2017 2:09 PM Title: B&E

Finally got a chance to read this after wanting to for a couple days. I'm enjoying it so far. The little details about the experience of being shrunken are great. Can't wait to see what this Lygia has in store for the tiny thieves.

Reviewer: Stepbonk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2017 2:36 PM Title: B&E

I seriously loved your "Make America Big Again" story, still owe it a review. This one looks way cool, too! It reminds me of an oldie I once read where some mafia goons shrink themselves to rob a lady and it all goes haywire. One of them tries to grow back and ends up a 3 foot tall midget who dies when his face gets mashed underfoot.

 

I think it would be neat if one of the criminals in this tale also tried to grow back and ended up becoming a little footslave, and another tries the opposite approach. Me, if I was one of those guys I'd climb onto one of Lydia's flip flops and set myself to slowly shrink away until her thong straps are literally sky high. After all, why would a hot girl with sexy pedicured feet wear flip flops in the fall or winter? Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear you liked that story. Me and Inwiththebooks had a lot of fun with it.

Tempting as your idea sounds, sadly, I had to keep Lygia true to what her character is. Haha. It's a nice fantasy though.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2017 1:20 AM Title: B&E

Well the first chapter was great. Cool shrinking and you describe how massive everything is quite well.
I assume every footstep that Lygia takes will be like an earthquake, her voice incredibly powerful. Will she notice them or think they are bugs? Really looking forward to this. Will she wear her heels?
Later,
Diesel

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2017 4:34 PM Title: B&E

I always love this kind of ironic plots, where something goes horrible wrong. Hope this story doesnt :] Keep it going!

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