Date: November 16 2017 2:02 PM Title: The Game
Finally, I was waiting anxiously for a continuation :)
Evil and playful as I love, the scale is Ok. The plot is unpredictable and unexpected.
Thank you for writing :D
Glad your so enthusiastic!
Date: September 05 2017 1:06 PM Title: Lizzy's rampage
One of the most exciting story I have ever read!
Perfect balance of (almost) gentle and evil, really interesting their ability of shrink not just whole cities, but also planes, cars (and ships, I suppose :D ) at their will.
Interesting the episode of unaware destruction of small things by other women.
Thank you for writing this story, one of my favorites!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for those kind words! Appreciate it a lot. Your welcome, but the pleasure is all mine. I realy enjoy writting this story
Date: September 04 2017 7:37 PM Title: Lizzy's rampage
Holy crap what can be done to stop Lizzy?! Will the president give in to her demands? What are her demands? Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Aight thx man! Glad the story carries you away! You will soon find out
Date: August 31 2017 7:38 AM Title: Shocking news
This is getting so good! The part about the little man seeing the buildings in Lizzy's cleavage is just genius... And the way she treats the tiny people is delicious.
But most of all, I'm really excited about where you've taken it. It sounds like maybe Lizzy is going to grow with the amulet now? I'm really rooting for her to grow to several miles tall, fight the military old school style, and then take over the entire world. Also looking forward to some interaction with the mom and the tiny city, as well as more with the other two girls.
Really glad you've found your inner author. The world of literature is a beautiful world, and nothing against video games but I believe that reading/writing can open your mind in ways that on-screen entertainment cannot.
Keep up the good work!
Thank you very much for your kind words Hongo.
glad you like the personality of Lizzy. I'm happy that readers experience her in the way I intended to while writing.
As for the next chapter, I'm almost done with it. So you can soon find out what will happen :)
I can say that all girls will have their gts time in the whole story
Yeah, I definitely agree with your statement about the world of literature.
As for gts material, I lately prefer reading a good gts story above watching or even buying a gts movie/clip.
A movie can be great, but there is no more room for your imagination, everything is already filled up.
Date: August 07 2017 2:50 AM Title: Shocking news
Im so Sorry Hongo i was replying on you review and i accidently erased it. Wtf!
I copied the text below here. Hope you dont mind.
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Date: August 06 2017 2:39 PM Title: Shocking news
Just read the story as it stands so far... There seem to be a lot of these types of stories being made now, these being ones where shrunken cities appear in the houses of giant girls and are subjected to their evil whims. Incident at Grove View Apartments, Mega Mom's Mini Metropolis, to name 2 of my recent favorites.
Yours is so far one of the best. I love the concept, and I love the characters. They are acting exactliy how they should until now. I'm hoping that either Lizzy or Christi do end up gaining even more power and shrinking more cities. Also hoping to see some giant foot massage/pedicure scenes as well as placing the people on their boobs and thighs and things. Including the mom could get fun as well.
Also want to comment about your language, because you keep mentioning it. Sometimes authors who are late to the language come up with very interesting styles. Their prose can even become poetic, especially if they have a good vocabulary but aren't exposed to contemporary English vernacular and speech patterns. I find that you fit into this category. So no complaints from me on that agenda.
Thanks for contributing and keep up the good work!
Just wow! I could only dream for a review like that. Many thanks there. I must say, i was realy insecure to write a story and post it. I thought 'who am i to think i could post a story next to all those brilliant writers here like Topmilenko, Hedin, Chozo. Just to name few. Funny you mention those two stories. They are actually one of my favorites to. I allready read them multiple times and probably will do so in de future 😊 Especially the writer of Incident at grove view. I respect him a lot as writer and i allready send him countless of credits with my other account lol. Its more than a honor that you compare him with me. Im glad that there are actually people that enjoys my story. Thats enough motivation for me to continue. Its also great i finaly seemed to have found a hobby. I realy enjoy writing and to think its only since a couple of years i started reading books. Its better then playing Street fighter and battlefield all the time lol. Havent gamed for more then a week now and thats a rarity. As for the story. I dont want to give away to much, only that you wont be disappointed 😉
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Date: August 01 2017 11:44 PM Title: Shocking news
I liked the story. Looking forward to more. What will happen to the city? Will we see another city get shrunk? Maybe go through the process of it shrinking. I hope the Mother finds it. Maybe she will enjoy peering in at the tiny people. That would be cool. I'd like to see the Mother get involved.
thanks for the review, I appreciate it!
lol, nice to see you're enthusiastic about the story.
No worries though, the process of it shrinking, is also on the agenda ;)
The three girls are the main protagonists of the story, but the mother will definitely get involved
many thanks for your review ;)
Date: August 01 2017 10:06 PM Title: Shocking news
Hi, good job! This is my absolute favourite kind of story concept (tiny cities and stuff).
For English not being your first language, this is a great start to what I hope gets updated a lot. I spotted a fair share of spelling errors like you said, but they were very minor and they didn't really affect the story (and didn't bother me at all).
As for characters and stuff, I gotta say that Christi is my favourite kind, and it seems that maybe she will corrupt Emily; I like it when good characters turn to the dark aide and do bad things. (I wonder if we'll find out what Emily did to Spirit Lake City to make her feel guilty... That would be interesting)
Sadly I'm about to be away from the internet for a very long time so I'm afraid I won't be able to see this story progress to the end if you choose to continue it, and honestly sometimes it's tough to get reviewers here so I hope you don't get discrouraged, but I really do hope you continue on!
Thank you! it means a lot to me!
I'm glad the spelling errors didn't bother the reading. I will get better in it :)
I'm glad you liked the characters and that it triggered your curiosity to their story. That's what I was aiming for.
Sorry to hear you won't be able to use the internet.
Yes, it sometimes is tough to get reviewers for your work on the net.
I myself am also guilty for many years of enjoying someone else is work without giving appreciation for it.
I try to do it more now. It means a lot for the creator.
But, thank you very much for your kind words ;)