Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2017 4:47 PM Title: 14: Max and Mike

Where'swalden, you are the king at foreplay! This was just like some porn scene, but maybe even better becuase of the fact that Max was involved in this too.

I love how you used the restraints often in this chapter. Dianne and Mike fighting for dominance and to be on top.

As much as I wanted to see Dianne on top, it was entertaining to see them switch positions and embrace it. Maybe, Dianne will re-gain her dominance once she feels Max wiggling around inside her ass.

Ok, this is hot. Max is trapped in Dianne's ass. He can't move, or even speak, becuase the sperm is too sticky and acts as bondage for him. Not to mention that Dianne's ass will squeeze him again and again until she finds him.

I hope Dianne remembers about Max and not forget about him and shit him out in the toilet for someone else to find him.

Dianne really wanted to fuck Mike. Even though it seemed that she didn't mind Mike taking control, I think she would have preferred herself to take control. Now she can fuck Max and reassert her dominance.

I agree with Max. Mike is one lucky man. Dianne loves to play and she cooperates and makes each sex scene look like some porn video. While most sex scenes are dull in general and feature the same stuff, Dianne and Mike make it refreshing and I'm jealous that Mike gets to have a wife like that.

Part of me wonders if their sex is always like that or was it just the presence of Max that made it so much better. With Max in Mike's dick, his dick was bigger. So Mike was happy even though he had no idea. Also, we know Dianne loves it becuase she gets to fuck 2 guys at once, and now she gets to keep one to herself. I don't see any reason for Dianne to give Max up. She should use him a few more times before she returns him.

Was this how the other shrunken boy died? Stuck in sperm inside Dianne's ass? If so, what a way to go. I'm sure Max will survive this becuase Dianne is not going to make the same mistake twice. She has other plans for him. :)

I like the idea of Dianne restraining someone. Maybe Dianne can use string, tape, or rubber bands to bind Max and then use him like she planned with Mike? Even her vagina fluids should be sticky enough to glue Max together, haha.

All in all, fantastic chapter, and my favorite chapter is still Dianne, and I would love to keep seeing more of her.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Haha thank you! I tried to make this scene very intimate between Dianne and Mike, struggling for dominance and I tried to include vocals too instead of just descriptive scenes. Dianne didn't quite get her way, but you are right, she enjoyed every part of it and will likely show her dominance over Max when she gets him out. I can't spoil how the last shrunken boy died because that would ruin the temptation of not knowing ;) I'm glad you are enjoying the story so much and I plan on having another scene with Dianne just because of your feedback! Thanks and enjoy the next one! Once I sit down and write it lol