[Report This]Date: September 30 2017 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 5: Leah Needs A Favor
Ok i demand to know what's going on here, lol. Very hot chapter.
Date: July 07 2017 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 5: Leah Needs A Favor
What happened to the story??? This one is really, really great, I hope it doesn't get left to the wayside.
For that matter, I hope all is well with Necromanswer.
[Report This]Date: June 20 2017 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 5: Leah Needs A Favor
When the other woman held James, couldn't Leah just grow him out of her hand? We know James won't run and that way, the other woman couldn't crush him.
Kinda odd how the woman went all the way to the last stall, and opened the door which was not wide open like probably the stall next to it. Also, that woman just stood there and looked at Leah instead of feeling embrassed by seeing a naked woman.
Also, this woman addresses the little man first instead of Leah being naked. She doesn't even say sorry for opening the door. Also, wouldn't James look like a lego figure or atleast a doll to her? As an early 20 yr old, that should be her first thought instead of thinking it's a real person.
In addition, shrinking the woman and swallowing her was hot, but also unnecessary. What will that woman do? Tell the cops? They won't believe her. Leah fighting and shrinking her just felt like a waste of time.
Also, when the woman felt James climax on her thigh, wouldn't she think it was blood and not wonder what she just felt? How would she know that it wasn't blood and some mysterious liquid. After all, James is tiny to her anyway, any form of liquid might be mistaken for her own sweat.
The spray painting James was pretty creative. I would have thought he would just find doll clothes or soemthing.
Why was it necessary to get rid of James's boner. He was facing her body anyway, so his boner would be jammed into her body anyway. Jammed in her ass, it looks like. Basically, no one would see it regardless. I guess you just wanted to throw in that sexy ass scene, right?
Speaking of that ass scene, it was hot. I love how he was taped to the door so he couldn't escape her monstrous ass as she backed up into him. Then, I liked how the tape was falling apart so Leah had to hold James on the door with her ass.
Just to clarify, is James face right in front of her vagina? If yes, What if she just accidently pressed down on his head and it slips inside. Or at least a good rub down there would suffice.
I love this bikini bottom idea. I'm James loves it too.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: To andwer your last question first- his face is abover her vagina, against her pelvis. Also, I'm aware of the many problematic scenes in this chapter, that was done purposefully. Unfortunately, i cant explain the purpose for them without spoiling the next chapter. Things just got really weird, I know. But it will all make sense in the next chapter. I dont know if you will like it or not but i can assure you that you will be surprised.
Date: June 20 2017 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 5: Leah Needs A Favor
Very Nice! Jamesy as Leah's bikini bottom, definitely a beautiful image; but wouldn't Jamesy be begging and pleading with Leah to keep wearing him rather than buy a new one? Perhaps she could decide to only buy a sarong skirt to hide him for the ride home. What other clothes could Jamesy be for Leah to wear?
It would have been nice to read more detail about the short experience in Leah's butt crack. Still, very entertaining. Hopefully we'll be experiencing much much more of Leah's butt crack in finer detail, hopefully {smiling}.
What happened to Stacy is pretty hot. It would be nice if Leah gets constipated with Stacey and she's stuck in Leah's butt for a few days. Stacey and the missing Ms Myrtle would make a cute pair of living flip flops for Leah; rubberized and face up beneath Leah's feet with their arms and legs streched into straps. I know you said you have the story writen already, I'm just day dreaming scenarios so please don't mind me.
I do have to ask, did Leah "shrink" Jamesy down to two feet tall before making him her bikini bottom or did she "grow" him up to two feet in size?
Oh by the way, I know it's not Wonder Woman's golden lasso, I was just trying to be humorous previously. ; )
Author's Response: There will be a big surprise at the beginning of the next chapter. Also, she grew him from 2 inches to 2 feet in order to make him her bikini bottom