Date: June 19 2017 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
Excellent story ... I think that Clip's feelings towards Nicole are true ... You could imagine being so subdued by a being so many times bigger ... you could have some strange feelings ... it's not just lust or love ... a paragraph where she explains that some men have "broken" helps to understand a little more what Clip is feeling ... she is his goddess ... and the best thing is that she is only sixteen ...
The poor man can fall deeply in love and she does not even realize that ...he is a toy for her... which would be an ideal scenario for me ... :-) I love your story!
Author's Response:
Ahh … thanks for telling your thoughts on my work. I really like knowing what you guys think of it. While he is her toy, pet and slave. She treats him with care and a half a thimble of respect. I wish you a good day :)
Date: June 19 2017 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
I think this was one of the best chapters so far! I loved the foot worship at the beginning X3 I also can't wait to see Clip tell Nicole about his feelings for her, I think that would be a really emotional scene X3 You're doing an amazing job and I can't wait to see what's next!!
Author's Response:
Whoa, that was so inspirational, bro. Thanks for your unswerving support. I really enjoy reading your feedback pal, have a nice day :)
[Report This]Date: June 18 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
Amazing chapter I love it. Clip is such a lucky man. I love how this story is progressing. Can't wait to see Nicole's cruel side unleashed after they get off the mountain.
Author's Response:
Cruel. An adjective I used to describe Nicole at the beginning of the story. There’re no chances of that vanishing, but let’s just wait for the next chapter if she’ll play naughty. You made my afternoon (it’s already afternoon in my country XD) with this review, thanks a giantess ton pal.
Date: June 18 2017 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
Its your first story and it's pretty good but the relationship, the feelings feel kinda rushed. I'm not gonna lie, I fell into this trap with my story too. I mean think about it. She's humiliated him, used him for sex, almost killed him several times, etc. Most times she's "saved" him have been times where the only reason his life was in danger was because of her. I think the only REAL time she's saved him was when he almost drowned.
But the other times it was because of some accident caused by her or something along those lines and she "saves" him. And sure she promised to help on his crusade but it wasn't really out of the goodness of her heart or anything, it's to get him to submit to her. Ask yourself, would you fall in love with someone like that? Now if this person was REALLY beautiful like Nichole yeah, you might feel something, but is it love or lust?
Is it natural for some geniune comraderie to form? Yeah to some extent. But love? Its a little soon I think. Especially considering it was only a couple of chapters ago that she was torturing him, making him eat mud off her feet, shoving him in her anus. Lust is a different story. I'll believe that. She's hot, he's a young man. I can see it. Now of course this is all just my opinion, this is your story so write it how you want. I'm just giving my 2 cents. It's still a good story.
Author's Response:
Just the thing I was looking for. I had a feeling it was kind of too soon, or maybe just too soon. But we’ll see, after all, Clip is a mysterious human. Thanks for letting me know what you think, bud. I really appreciate it :)