[Report This]Date: September 03 2022 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story and I'm glad you're back! I just have one question though: What is Nicole's size? Because it seems pretty inconsistent based on your texts and the GTS convertor on the website.
In Chapter 1, it says that she's 20x the size of the old guy, assuming that the guy is 5 feet tall, that would make her at least 100 feet tall, and the guy 4 inches tall from her perspective.
But then in chapter 6, it says her foot only dwarfed Eclipse by a foot or so, which based on the convertor, only makes her about 50 feet tall, with Eclipse being 8 inches tall from her perspective.
A response would be nice.
[Report This]Date: December 09 2017 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice story. Too bad there hasn't been any recent updates.
[Report This]Date: June 08 2017 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
One of the best reads I've had in awhile. I love Nicole's gentle/violent personality makes for great story. Seems like there is a lot of unknowns about Eclipse though. Can't wait to see where this story goes seems like endless possibilities.
Author's Response:
I’m so happy that you liked Nicole’s personalities. Eclipse is indeed a very mysterious person. Thanks for the review, you have no idea how happy you made me.
Date: June 06 2017 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Definitely a solid start here. The fantasy and more modern elements mix well. Nicole herself is a fun protagonist, and you've struck a nice balance here by making her a controlling giant even while she has a moral system, distorted as it is. I'm hopeful she remains that way without becoming outright-evil. Her subtle interactions with the people are the most interesting so far - dangling, licking them, etc, since it demonstrates her power without resorting to violence.
One thing to work on is keeping everything in a single verb tense. I'd recommend keeping the story in past tense. It tends to jump around, at least in this first chapter, and can be a bit distracting. I really just noticed this because the character and other less-technical elements are working well so far.
Anyway, looking forward to reading the other chapters. Keep it up.
Author's Response:
Yes, I only did that in the first chapter to be able to tell how she grew up in a human village. Sorry if I confused you with that. Thanks for the review :)
Date: June 06 2017 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
A wonderful new story. The two sides of Nicole appeals to me. On one hanm I enjoy the mixture of sympathy and dominateda292; on the other hand look forward to her being turned the humilation by justified and proud human
Author's Response:
Awesome! I enjoy how you enjoy my story. Thanks for the time you took to review my story, it goes a long way in keeping me inspired.
Date: June 05 2017 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a really promising story! I think Nicole is a really fun and interesting character, and with Eclipse I think they could have some really fun back and forth banter along with some sexy time X3 I can't wait to see what comes next!
Author's Response:
Promising? Well this I can promise. You surely made my day by writing that review. Thanks for the support, more chapters coming soon. Have a good day :)
[Report This]Date: June 05 2017 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Aww I really like this. Nicole is a confident merciless giantess when defied but she also isnt a mindless monster and treats people well as long as they do what she asks. I really like eclipse as a character as well. I think he might be her first love, but it remains to be seen how harsh that love will be on hik at first lol. Maybe he will catch a cold from her hike and she will have to take care of him. I like where this is going alot.
Author's Response:
Yep, there’s a gentle tag on the story for a reason. But I’m not sure if that’ll come, Eclipse will have to be a good little boy for that tag to take effect ^^ Thanks for the review and good rating, have a good day :)
[Report This]Date: June 04 2017 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very good story!
Thank you for writing it.
Author's Response:
No, thank you for taking the time to rate and review it. It makes me so happy that there are readers who appreciate the effort I put into writing this story. More chapters coming soon. Have a good day :)
[Report This]Date: May 31 2017 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
Quite an enjoyable opening. Liked alot of the character build up and that cliffhanger really is a tease :3 Do you update regularly? Because overall this looks like it will be quite entertaining and I'm optimistic to see how it progresses ;)
Author's Response:
Yes, I do. Actually, I just posted this the day you read it. I’m very glad you liked it. Thank you so much for the good rating and inspirational review. I’m working on the second one right now, again thanks and have a good day.