Date: May 21 2017 10:55 AM Title: Jocks in deep
Not a fan of butt stuff and less of scat, but that doesn't mean i didn't enjoy the chapter. I love the whole concept of on girl shrinking a group of people and instead of taking it upon herself to do the deed of eliminating them she creates an unwares scenario. Using her friend as the executioner. I also like ho normal it is in this world that you are establishing to shrink and kill. The friend just took being responsible for the death's of a few guys as a playful prank and even decided to take part. It adds to the cruelty of the whole situation and I love it.
Author's Response: Always nice to get a compliment from you HaloIchigo. I always enjoy your work. I like situations where the victims are powerless to the simple forces of nature because of the fact they upset the establish order (Humans are on top but then they shrink and are on the bottom). A person being killed by a tornado isn't erotic but being kill by the bacterium on someons skin or the natural processes of their body that they can't control is because it's a simple form of nature that can't be controlled or defeated 9Especially at their current size)
Date: May 20 2017 3:24 AM Title: Jocks in deep
Great story with the bus.
Maybe a teacher, Mrs. Nelson, a redhead, shrinks a mouthy student. She wears tan pumps.
Great stuff,
Diesel
Author's Response: Thanks. I added those paragraphs in the first story so hopefully it has a better flow and feel to it. I have been throwing around some ideas for a school setting and a teacher punishing a student is definitely near the top of my list of those scenarios.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2017 12:48 PM Title: Jocks in deep
Really hot story!!
Author's Response: Thanks. Don't forget to check out the original creator of the idea.