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Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2018 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 75 - And Now for Something Completely Different

Boy Scout?  Can't be I left out Jill (who I hope is well, and likely one of thoses twists), Erin, Fred and the others, whom I hope have good endings as well LOL!



Author's Response:

Perhaps boy scout is the wrong term, but you wish well for everyone. Let's say a good samaritan then. Anyway, we have not heard the last of Jill, Erin, Fred and the others. We'll find out who has good endings, or not.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2018 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 75 - And Now for Something Completely Different

Nah, see you got two requests as it is, don't need a chapter being a listing rather a narritive.  Thanks though.



Author's Response:

I figured I'd list all of you. But whatever. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Layston Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2018 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 75 - And Now for Something Completely Different

Eh, I don't mind the shout out. Thanks for asking!



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: Battlemaster-3d Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2018 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 75 - And Now for Something Completely Different

Grateful that Sam got a 'break', just wish it was two or three chapters further on with Julie, rather then two or three chapters further on Julie gets a tad pissed at that break.  Sam is going to have to break himself of his overcharged sex drive.  That or Juile may just try and though she won't do what she did to him that saterday night again, her solutions might be a bit less pleasant then what Sam would like...

Sam wants his family, how sweet, it appears he considers Julie part of that family, even better, but again he needs to leave those other women alone, wouldn't you consider an 8 foot demi-goddess enough?  Do you really need a early 30s woman to get you through(yes he was hurt, yes she is of normal standing like him, yes she wanted to heal him, but...)?  Enough Sam knows the answers, take Julie back, two sleep only with Julie or Julie approved women with Julie, three slam dick against door until bloody if he considers options outside one and two.

Sam take back Julie, if you have sex have it with only Julie or Julie approved women with Julie in same room, again if women outside of this seem attractive slam dick into concerete, door, steel beem, gravel, ect until pain overrides attractiviness and find bandages to stop the bleeding and ask Julie to kiss the boo-boo :-).

Good chapter like the Python title, the Farris quote (Cameroon's Porsche), it was a bit more humerous then the last few (espeacilly 73...).  Just when writing Sam, please have him use his computer scienist/engingeer head, all the time over then his opps it's got two legs and walks head...



Author's Response:

Ow! Option three doesn't sound so great.

Sometimes no matter how smart we are, there's one head that overrides the other. Let's hope Sam can keep it in the correct head.

Reviewer: Layston Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2018 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 75 - And Now for Something Completely Different

I liked this style a lot. While it isn't as conversation heavy, I felt like it was more descriptive. I loved it!



Author's Response:

Cool! Thanks. I'll probably incorporate more of this style in the future, but not as much. I just had fun with this chapter; I hope you can tell.

BTW, Layston I have propostion for you and Battlemaster-3dBigdawg KLast_one_33, and Ugly one: Which ones of you want to be mentioned in the next chapter?

I'm willing to write any of you in if you'd like. Nothing big, but hopefully you'll like the shout out.

 


Reviewer: Ugly one Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2018 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 75 - And Now for Something Completely Different

Well Sam got his release, if Julie finds out she will be angry, but Sam's been doing things close to this the whole story.  Unless I missed something (will re-read) to be sure it was mutal oral sex and a shower,  So, yeah she will be pissed, but in comparsion to what she did, I think she will calm down and think to herself, Sam had this one coming, though she might yell at him a bit after he takes her back and then doing everything in her power to make sure her little man Sam only releases in her or her little woman.

As far as him taking Julie back, I think Sam may of reached a point where taking her back would be taking the entire house, he missed them all, if one is gone it won't be as it should, so he will take her back as part of the group of Giantess, normals, and Borgford victums,  He will have a full and unified and when Julie grows in understanding happy household.  Heres hoping he takes Julie back.  Thanks interesting read.



Author's Response:

In case you didn't pick up on it, the difference was the writing. I used more humor in this chapter. As far as Sam, you're right, not much difference. And you're right about Sam getting his release. Let's hope he can get his head together now and move on with things.

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