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Reviewer: Battlemaster-3d Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2018 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 73 - New house, new situations

If you please keep Julie and Sam together, Both are good for the other, and if Sam can  get rid of his ablity (and need) to mount every female in the house, while Julie can reign in her jealsouly you would have an unbeatable team.

Sam's:  the Tall Woman's Club is messing with his girl friend and girlfriend is scared SHITLESS he will leave her.

Julie's:  Mounted and sexually assulted Sam, even with the almost angelic display of gentleness, and retraint that protected Sam from physicall danger(as shown by his encounter with Zoe following).  Mocked, and rediculed Sam's strengths, achievements and skills (as well as being a man).  See link to get an over view of what Julie looks and could do to Sam (see Jen) https://www.deviantart.com/openhighhat/art/Twenty-Five-Feet-Tall-752065693

Club, don't know, guessing they know about Sam's powers with regard to at least Julie and Jill (both could of been biten by a misquito, but considering Julie discussed her Clit size with them, they have to be almost certain he's the cause of thier continuing growth).  Likely they would do next to anything to get their hands on Sam, keep him alive and producing while learning how to make other males like him (so much about being too small to screw...).  Don't know if they are aligned with the drug companies, but would bet they have drugged Julie with out her knowledge each time she met with them.

Club in order to get Sam 'secured' is more then willing to cause a tempory rift beteewn them and would like attempt heal it once they had him secure, locked down and safe.  Julie is the ideal guard, she loves him and won't let him get hurt, plus she can be blackmailed about shawn's death and her mounting of Sam (as well as her not telling Sam the truth about her knowing he was infected).  With Julie Sam is likely not going to do anything that would have the club kill her (until they find out how to infect more males with his virus he's more vaulable), He loves her and as part of a path to liberate themselves he would be seeking reconcilation for the both of them, which is great for the Club, cause that road is a bit long for us all.

So, Sam and Julie need each other, please if at all possible keep them together.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

Battlemaster-3d, I hear you about Julie and Sam. Everyone wants them to stay together. I'm not sure they were meant to be. One thing is for sure: they have a lot of self-reflection and work ahead of them. Can they do it?

The club is not interested in getting "securing" Sam; only in making Julie realize that Sam is beneath her (he is literally but is he really beneath her mentally, emotionally and morally?) and that anything she wants to use Sam for is valid. In fact, the more she uses him and other "underlings" -- which is pretty much everyone under seven feet tall -- the better.

Thanks for the review. The next few chapters are almost ready to be put up. I just need to find the time to get them up. (I always do a final review when posting which can take some time). Hopefully, all of you who posted will have your answers soon. Or not.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2018 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 73 - New house, new situations

Good Chapter

I think they need to stick it out and fix it Sam and Julie. 

Julie needs to lose her "new friends" since they don't want whats good for her, they only want to tell her how she should live and yes you need to hang out with folks who are simular to you, but when they tell you who you can date, what you can eat and how you should live your life those aren't friends, those are your personal bosses dicating your life.

The Rape is troubling, though with her level of strength and size it could of been much, much worse.  I would agrue she actually was using a bit of restrait if she did break bones, dislocate joints or rip ligiments.

What if it was biology that motivated it, we don't know the after effects, he might grow three inches form her honey (highly doubtful since once a male in this type of story starts to shrink they usaully don't stop), but if he did Zoe would notice, since Zoe was there she would know the whole story.  Julie was acting irrantional why?  When she had several oppertunites to let Sam deesclate she didn't, though if he had left at the beginning it would of likely not happen, was that mental or biology, did she lose it or was his presence a marker for her body and the longer he was the more her biology demanded release.

Then there is the aftermath, she turned on a dime, when theres a release hormones get reblanced, the body tells itself the needs are fulfilled and there is a relaxing peroid.  Then releazing what she had done she goes into an immediate fugee state, possible it was mental, but the body produces a lot of hormones when stressed, did her body tigger it?  Could all this growth and being around the virus perhaps have Julie evolve a need, could her hormones be so out of whack she was having a legendary PMS session without her knowledge?  Could it be another way she grows ever larger and I would hope be a potentail cure for them? Having seen it before will she have enough control to ask and if Sam says yes be more accomdating to him?

If it is biology, Zoe being a counsolur can help Sam work through it, while Jill and the clinic figure out how to at least pacify Julie so she and Sam can be safely together.  Again I think they should be together and work out thier issues.



Author's Response:

Ugly one, I hear you about Julie and Sam needing to stick it out. What do you think: do they have it in them to reconcile and make their relationship grow? We'll see.

I'm not sure what Julie will do with her new friends. They are clearly arrogant and yet accept Julie as one of their own. However, Julie is the new one of the group, even though she is the tallest and biggest. Can she change the other girls minds to accept Sam? Doe she even realize she should, or perhaps she is beginning to feel superior and immune to other's feelings? Which way do think this will go?

Another interesting theory on why the growth and the shrinkage. Do you really think we'll find out everything? 

So many questions. I do know where this is going, but until I post the chapters, I could change things so keep the ideas coming.

Thanks again for the review, Ugly one.

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2018 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 73 - New house, new situations

Julie and Jill what to do what to do?

Both have severly screwed over Sam, Julie litterally, both know they are wrong and I believe both feel quite guility about.


Julie's little outburst followed by forced sex smells of transferance and projection, she knew she was wrong by not telling Sam that she was aware of him having the disease, she knew she was wrong to be pissed off at him having a good time, she knew she was wrong about freezing him out from the giantess club, she knew she was wrong for listening and at least tacidily agreeing with those who litterally belittle their love and want it to be broken up. By her reaction she KNEW she was WRONG RAPING THE HELL out of him. Finally I believe she know full well whats making everyone grow (and Play to GM it isn't the inverse bench, it's the fluids (sweet, oils and espeacily the semen) of infected males) and if she doesn't handle that well, her 'love' tap with his behind will be of equal concern rather then the dominate issue. In essence when folks are wrong to avoid being wrong they place blame on everyone but themselves, and when the screw up (or ups) involves a loved one, the person isn't thinking striaght and has domanance over the loved one well you get what Julie did.


Jill from chapter 72, she knows of the disease, she saw what happened to Julie, why do you think she volenteering at the clinic and still growing, a limitless growth potential by 'handling' the infected. There is likely a better cure is out there, but since most of the techs, nurses, and interns are female and are likely growing, I sure more safety testing and research is needed before such a cure can come out though, you know it's a growth industry...

What should they do, Julie needs to be confronted ironically enough by Jill and made to understand the one thing that's important 'who does Sam put first? regardless of the situation, why does he and what has he gotten in return' answer Julie, cause he LOVES her with all his HEART, a couple of ego boosting song sessions, and what every caring human being should get when they are sick a level of compassion and care. Julie I would hope would have her mind snap back and begin to recropicate even if she has to do it without him being her boyfriend, or even friend, that as badly as she's messed up she will always put him first even if he hates her.

This is strike two for Julie with the third coming down the plate, she's killed a man, Cindy and Zoe know what she did, the whole house will know Erin and Sams parents will know the dam is breached if she continues to be a *itch and not admit she is wrong and make amends Rape is a state crime (though it might be different in your universe) in the real world she could maybe plea it down to Agravated sexual assult and spend the next five years in jail with a felony record and in addition to be a giantess have the marker of sex offender on her. I hope and sense she will do right and try to correct what she's inflected on a man who loves her unconditionally.

Jill, knows the disease, knows how to spread it, and likely if there are any promising cures. If she is truly sorry she will first help her sister make things right with Sam and try to help everyone in the house, perhaps by having them in clinic trails and either curing them out right or restoring a bit of thier hieght while working behind the scenes for more effective drugs to be release before their "slated" to be.

Jill knowing Julie doesn't need the distraction will find her new "friends" at the giantess club and tell them to back off Julie's relationship, they've done enough damage already, and if they don't she knows of some strains of Borg that don't help them grow... That will infact make them quite tiny compared to Sam... she could be bluffing???? Likely not!!!

In essence the sisters I would hope acknowledge thier wrong doing and take fairly significate risks to fix what they have done to Sam and with enough effort and whole lot of Love the trust can be reesblished and the incident that could destory the relationship, Julie and catch Jill in the back wash can be set aside. While Julie keeps it in her mind as what never to do again!



Author's Response:

Wow, quite the analyst you are. Transferance and projection -- big words. There are likely some psychological issues here, but I like to think of it as people, being human, inevitably make mistakes. Is Julie's behavior Saturday night a honest mistake or something bigger that she's going to pay for later? And speaking of paying for it, yeah, I suppose it is rape which is illegal. I wonder if she'll go to jail. Of course girls hardly ever go to jail for rape except in cases where the boy is under age, and Sam is definitely under age. Hmmm, interesting idea.

You have an interesting theory on why and how the disease spreads and if Jill and Julie know all about it. I agree, more research needs to be done. Will it? 

Lot's of interesting ideas, Bigdawk. We'll see what happens, but I won't be getting too deep into motives and such; you'll just have to infer that yourself.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Layston Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2018 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 73 - New house, new situations

Damn, that that was unexpected! If Sam forgives Julie, then he is a better man that I am. But, then again, she might be acting the way she did because of everything she has been going through. 

This was an excellent chapter. Hope to see more of this soon! 🙌



Author's Response:

Layston, thanks for the review. I don't want to give anything away about what's coming, but I hear you. At this point anything can happen with those two. Cheers.

Reviewer: io1908 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2018 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 73 - New house, new situations

Loved it! Julie rocks!

Author's Response:

She rocked Sam's world! Will Sam ever be the same?

Thanks, lo1908.

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