Date: June 06 2017 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Beach
lmao at those chapter end notes. Does that mean Mom isn't gonna join the party?
Another two great chapters. The positives from the earlier chapters continue to apply. The size content is top notch. The comparisons, the dialogue, Sams internal stuff and the social aspects are all great. I was definitely wrong to think this story might end up light on tension. I know some people don't like that aspect of these stories but I love it. It especially does a lot for stories like this that strive to maintain a more "realistic" tone. Sam and Julie would naturally have doubts and non-positive emotions about the frankly massive physical changes they're both going through. Of course it's all a balance and I think you've handled it very well thus far.
What else? I love Julie's attitude about her own size. She likes being big after a lifetime of being small so she has to manage her own giddiness at her good fortune with Sam's apprehension about his lack of physical stature and now his very clear shrinking. Also excited to see what Julia's new job at Greg's Gravel entails.
I'm not sad to see Erin go but I did enjoy her chapters and wouldn't mind seeing her reappear. I thought chapter ten was a little light on dialogue especially when it came to the insecurity discussion. Kind of glossed over that but S and J did end up talking about it in the next chapter, so that's good.
Overall I think the story is firing on all cylinders and it definitely hits a lot of my buttons Look forward to more.
Author's Response:
spgts,
Thanks again for the kind words. Mom doesn't join the party, so to speak, but she is integral to the plot; both moms. The size is continually changing and more characters will be brought in. We'll see how the size thing will effect both Sam and Julie. And it won't always be in a positive way. We're not done with the sisters -- we'll never be done with them, lol. I'm glad you enjoy the tension, because I do. Lots more coming.
To everyone,
Sorry about the update cycle, I'll put a chapter up tonight. I was away for the weekend.