Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2017 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Realization

 Aw Man!  Three chapters of slow torture... Naw, jus' kidding! ;) Subtlety, Right?

 Reading this chapter, I could sense a writing style compatible to 'Thomthumb's. Have you read any of his stories? He's one of my favorites. Don't get me wrong, I'm not comparing - it's just that, this chapter just seemed to have that 'Feel' 

 It's a great set-up, the next chapter is going to be a real eye-opener, I assume. And, at the rate she's growing - she'll soon be able to slowly start taking control - that laughter of hers as she realized that she's becoming taller than him, ...oh yeah!  ;`)

  Great Stuff! 

Author's Response:

midnight,

Sorry man. It's slow but there's a good long way with some twists thrown in. Currently, 20 chapters have been written but it's almost done. I know where I'm taking this.

No, I never heard of Thomthumb as an author. Sorry. I'll have to look him up.

Eye opener? You'll just have to wait and see. I will say it gets more intimate. I hope you like it.

Thanks!