Reviews For Alpha Adams
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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2017 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nobody joked about "beta reader" vs "Beta reader"? wtf happened?

Anyway this story was pretty good, or simply great considering it's your first.
Is there anything we can do to persuade you to write a second story?

Reviewer: DollsizeHarlequin Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2017 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Cool story :)  Some good detail and some fun action scenes, very enjoyable POV descriptions and Alpha's attitude though I think attention to size comparison needs some fine tuning. Some of the comparisons seemed to make the Tiny appear to change sizes (not assuming she did, just some of the items she was compared to seemed disproportionate).

Over-all though, very enjoyable, as someone else said looking forward to some more and perhaps some of the butt-punishment you teased haha :P

 

Reviewer: akanobody84 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2017 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's annoying to read without proper paragraphs.

Reviewer: jx59syun Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 22 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very well-written, Ms. Adams is very forward, isn't she?

Reviewer: Reheart Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2017 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was good! Can't wait for the ass action

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2017 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Best teacher ever.

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2017 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Welcome to the party Stella.

I have to admit, I'm not a big fan of feet, but I love F/f.  That said, I found myself kind of sqirming along with Diana.  Poor little thing.

These are some great characters, and that really matters to me as a reader.

Please keep writing and enjoy your time here.

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