Date: March 30 2017 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Cool story :) Some good detail and some fun action scenes, very enjoyable POV descriptions and Alpha's attitude though I think attention to size comparison needs some fine tuning. Some of the comparisons seemed to make the Tiny appear to change sizes (not assuming she did, just some of the items she was compared to seemed disproportionate).
Over-all though, very enjoyable, as someone else said looking forward to some more and perhaps some of the butt-punishment you teased haha :P
Date: March 21 2017 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Welcome to the party Stella.
I have to admit, I'm not a big fan of feet, but I love F/f. That said, I found myself kind of sqirming along with Diana. Poor little thing.
These are some great characters, and that really matters to me as a reader.
Please keep writing and enjoy your time here.