Reviewer: SmolCrowing Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20 2021 10:26 PM Title: Make The World Big Again

Considering how much this story made my blood boil, I can only assume that is the mark of good satire. And even things that could be considered insensical actually bolster the strength of this satire. I strongly doubt that a man could impregnate a woman at a few inches tall, so unless they kept "Breeders" at normal size (which I doubt they would. 20 million males, even spread out and likely locked up, would probably lead to an uprising) or miraculously discovered a way to synthesize male semen, bye bye human race. There's plenty of other aspects, like how there would definitely be women sympathetic to men, there's nothing saying that women can't be shrunk too so depending on what happened to those sympathetic women people might wonder where the line is drawn, etc., but I'm sure that would distract from the story's focus. And I'm assuming this is mainly being played for laughs, so it's foolish to expect flawless character writing.

 

Overall, great satire, wouldn't read again, 10/10

Author's Response:

Yeah definitely not meant to be taken seriously or even go into practical stuff. Pretty much just intended to be satire from a couple of dumb fetish writers. Happy to hear you enjoyed/didn't enjoy?

Reviewer: officerkc Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2017 4:14 PM Title: Make The World Big Again

Haha what a fun story. I felt it was a tad anti climatic and some parts seemed out of place, but you did a great job. The satire was on point. The giantess interaction was  fun. It was neat to see it from different views. Anyoneas offended by this story needs to go away lol. 

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2017 10:01 AM Title: Make The World Big Again

I truly have enjoyed your story. A great idea and very well written. Maybe someday you could continue the story of how things became different in other countries like Japan, Russia, or the Middle East.
Bravo,
Diesel