You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Fertility goddess loli lilith Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2016 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

A quik and interesting set up. The mom should embaress her son by playing video games better than he does impressing his friends while crushing him with each kill.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2016 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 2

Awesome.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 26 2016 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 2

Pretty good. PLease continue.

BTW, what's a "chest piece" (1st chapt)?

You must login (register) to review.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.