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Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2018 11:46 PM Title: Round Two...

Hi! I wanted to write the review sooner but work caught up quite fast.

One problem "fixed" and another to come. Really, Abby can't catch a breath. Throughout Casey and Eve's fight I kept trying to find a side to cheer on but got quite difficult, both of them were definetily on the wrong here and it shows since they start yelling at each other, throwing low blows all the time. Is good that there's not "good" side in this case.

Wonder what solution Eve came up with, and whether it'll keep them away enough for Ebon to do as she pleases. 

Poor Abby, she's the real victim on this one. Glad Kari snapped her out of victimizing herself. Though, I guess this kind of situation might help her in some way when choosing a mate in the future, there should be a lot to take in after all.

And well, Ebon back. Very cursiousin why she's going from a destroyer to kidnapper in this one. Maybe someone needs energy? Hope to get to know soon!

See ya!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review Kenta, sorry it took me so long to write something back to you. I hope you read and enjoy my next chapter to if you liked the last one. :)

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