[Report This]Date: April 30 2018 11:44 PM Title: Mine is yours.
I'm really sorry it took me this long to read the new chapter ;_;
Now with that out of my chest, onto the chapter.
Casey seems to be planning something special, with a kind of obvious intention. Meanwhile, Kari is acting more suspicious. I now have some idea of what she might be hiding but I'll have to wait and see.
Also, now we get to know Najia is waking up in 1 or 2 days. really wonder how will the story go from there. I'm a bit scared to ask but, does Najia's awakening means the story is getting to its end?
Now about the star of the chapter. Nya was very cute in this one. While reading her flashback for some reason I kind of pictured a Disney movie lol. Sadly, the ending wasn't as happy as a Disney movie...
While is good that Najia managed to pick her up, can't put away the thought of Nya's mother... Hope she's okay, though, that would only mean she's still looking for her child... Doesn't seem like a bright future either way. Also, I wonder if it was awkward to write scenes in which most of the dialogue was "Nyaa".
The ending with the belly rub was cute! Nice one that Abby decided to went onwards, to not hurt Nya's feelings.
Looking forward to the next one, specially since it seems it'll be Casey-centered. However, I'll be traveling in a couple of weeks so I'm unsure when I'll be able to read it... Still, I'm sure it'll be a nice one.
See ya~
Author's Response:
I'm really sorry it took me this long to write you back! I swear I wasn't being vindictive! I mean it! Please don't hate me. T^T
To answer your question, once Najia wake's up, the story will be at it's end. So in a sense, yes. But, that doesn't mean we're through with it just yet. There's a lot of stuff I need to get to. Kari, Ebon, and of course, Enya come to mind. I'm sure you're curious of at least one of three.
I'm glad you enjoyed Nya's back story. I wanted it to be clear why she is so attached to Abby so hopefully my sentiment was strong enough in it. But as for her mother, don't expect to see her in This, story.
And no... it was actually really fun writing the dialog for Nya and her mother. XD
I'm wondering how confused everyone else is when their sentences made perfect sense in my mind and no one elses. :3
I hope you read this next chapter soon and that you still enjoy the story.
Again, I'm really sorry I never replied back to you. I just had some personal stuff that kept me away from here. Sorry...
[Report This]Date: April 16 2018 10:41 AM Title: Mine is yours.
Oh yes, I missed Nya! Glad to see she was alright... *Insert happy sigh*
However, I'm still dying to know about Kari! I'm getting more and more ideas about what's happening and its killing me, slowly. And I got a new question about Kari, is she going to be able to return Abby to normal? Maybe thats the lie? She can't turn her back to normal and she tricked Abby to help her? Or maybe it was the one of the other comment, maybe both? Ahhhggg, I'm going slowly crazy, getting more theories as the time goes...
Also, I think Casey has a date prepared for Abby, kind of obvious if you see how shy she is acting and all, and I'm guessing its a picnic or something like that, since she has a basket.
Though I ship EveXAbby, seeing her interactions with Casey is kind of fun.
You said that next chapter shouldnt take as long as this one, but... When do you think you are going to update?
...Dont you really get tired of my comments? I feel like a spamer or something xD
Author's Response:
Who knows how far people will go for the ones they love. Whatever Kari did you'll just have to wait and see. I will say, that it MIGHT, be one of the things you've listed over the past few reviews... but I won't say which. X3
I'll keep my mouth closed on what Casey has planned to but I think you're on the right track. Not as much cloak and dagger with that mystery, :P
I haven't started the new chapter yet since school started back up again but I'm also not going to have to re-write it either so I'm positive it won't take over two weeks this time. I had a chapter mix up with Casey and Nya and realized about halfway after writing it I did it backward's so that's why I took so long. As for a set date, I can't say. Sorry... :(
Also, I never get tired of your reviews. You constantly question things that go on meaning I'm doing my job right. :D