Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2018 10:29 PM Title: Face, Faith, and Feathers!

I'm early-ish on this one =P

I have a bit of fear for birds, so having an enormous harpy in front of me could be terrifying, I have to agree with Abby on that...

Well, Amy is a really cute girl. Though, I can see why she would be difficult to write. Seems like she got a nice start with Abby, compared to some of the other girls, even if the teen was scared of her at the start and a bit later on.

Also, Abby still lets her curiosity take priority when choosing what to do, though I can't blame her. I'm also curious about how Najia got ahold of Amy's egg.

And well, nice scare got Abby there, it was pretty well written. Good thing she noticed what was going on quick enough. However, I do feel a bit bad for her dress, hope Eve isn't really too upset about it...

It was mostly a cute interaction between Amy and Abby from here. Glad she tiny got a breather for a bit. There's also a hint about Ebon's (?) relationship with Amy, which seems to be a rather nice one. If she actually referred to Ebon, of course.

The ending was also really cute, with Casey finally getting something nice ^^ I still don't know who I want Abby to be with ;_;

A cute chapter indeed.

Oh, and I guess that's where the vore tag comes from. Congrats on fulfilling that.

See ya~

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review Kenta! :D

This chapter was a bit tricky to figure out but F.W is the one to thank for his help with Amy. I wanted to try a few things with her but after going over them with him he helped me figure out a good way to have her and helped me write her in. :3

I'll be going more into Amy's backstory as the next couple chapters go on. Hope you can wait till then. :P

Also, I have all the tags there for a reason, ;)

I plan on using them all don't you worry~

 

See ya next time!

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2018 12:48 PM Title: Face, Faith, and Feathers!

I'm liking Abby more and more. The way she's taking control of most of the girls like a loving older sister is nice. Casey tsundere moment was funny, too. It's interesting how Amary or "Amy" called Ebon of all Hominals "nice face." This was also a relaxing chapter. You usually end chapters with some cliffhanger that has us thinking, "he loves torturing us, doesn't he?" 

 

Btw, have you checked out Johnrussi's Puberty story? He's a new and might I add, exceptionally good writer on this site whose story focuses on a loli giantess. Someone even mentioned your story, Precious Little Demons in one of his reviews. I recommend it plus, he's a really nice guy.

 

Keep up the awesome work as always, guys :)

Author's Response:

I do take pleasure in my cliffhangers, but, that wouldn't fit for this chapter. I'm glad you liked it Nothingness. I plan to expand on the next chapter for Amy don't you worry.

Also no I've never read the story Puberty yet, but know that I know a little bit about it I'll give it a read, thanks. :)