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Reviewer: Lucia1312 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2017 2:21 PM Title: A Date With Destiny.

When do you think you are going to update again? I cant wait!!



Author's Response: F.W is keeping up with me, he's working on the new chapter as we speak. :D I think he'll have something soon, at least that's what he told me. I'm just as eager to see to. XD Not being able to write is really a pain. 3:

Reviewer: Lucia1312 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2017 6:22 PM Title: A Date With Destiny.

So exciting! The truth comes out!! (>u<)



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it. :D

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2017 4:02 AM Title: A Date With Destiny.

Well, this was certainly unexpectedly fast... I actually read it the thay it was uploaded but couldn't review until now, sorry for that.

Eve and Abby get to know each other even more, I found it a bit fun how the small one thought Eve was drinking blood and it was rather cute the vampire reaction when asked if she was the one that cooked. Also, Eve surely know how to set the mood.

Then the twins come in, poor little ones. Though, they might have enjoyed the ride...

The song part was a bit sad but I'm sure Abby is really thankful for that, Eve hit bullseye there. But, not so much with the next part. It was a really powerful scene, showing a side of Eve which we only saw in glimpses before. I know for sure Brook didn't mean to get the vampire that mad, I suppose not even she expected the Eve to be that... Nervous? Anxious? She certainly was very expecting about the date and Abby in general.

I wonder how she got to the state that Abby means so much for her, why is it that the fact that she can love a human is so amazing... I suppose this might be revealed in the next chapters but I'm certainly intrigued about it, about how she became that... Wary? With other beings and specially humans.

I couldn't stop reading after Eve snapped, I was worried about Eve, about Abby and about Brook. I hope the mermaid doesn't gets it too hard after all this. I mean, surely she'll be fine now but Eve might get her revenge somehow lol.

I liked how Eve revealed her red eyes in the dark, for some reason.

And now Abby knows some more of Eve and it seems she will even more revelations later on. I wonder if she feels relieved somehow? At the start of the chapter she talked about Eve as if she was in a totally different level than her. Now that she knows the vampire isn't almighty and that even she has flaws, I wonder if Abby thinks they're even closer now.

So yes, great chapter.

See ya~



Author's Response:

I didn't expect that either! I freaked out when F.W just messaged me and said he was done!? XD

I loved how he made their interactions so cute too! Eve seems so different than my other characters and he really did her proud. :3

From what I know and asked, there was supposed to be a special contrast in this chapter with expectations, so he kept a moral I didn't even see, lol. I'm glad he was able to do that even if I didn't see it the first time I read it... >.<

A lot will get revealed with Eve in the next chapter, F.W assured me of that. :)

I guess we'll both just have to wait and see. XD

Thank you for the review Kenta... even if this chapter wasn't even mine... :(

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2017 3:48 PM Title: A Date With Destiny.

Great job with the chapter Franchise Writer. You guys are doing a great job with this story. This chapter was great, I loved how Abby ended up being the one who calmed Eve down, even though it seemed at the start that Abby was the one who needed encouragement. Even though Abby is so small and one of the humans, she’s having a big effect on all the monsters in the group. And I especially love the relationships she’s developing with Eve and Casey. I’m always look forward to reading this. Both of you keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review Foreignkanto. :) I'm glad you liked the chapter as much as I did, :D From what we've talked about expect more to come with Abby's relashionships. We have big plans for the upcoming chapters.

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