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Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2017 4:49 AM Title: Another round!

This was uploaded just after my last day at my job, feels quite freshening to read ^^

Abby did her best to keep up with Poppy's drinking pace, quite impressive for someone her size. The girls drunken antics were fun, the teenager trying to get off the dish, Poppy grabbing and dropping her back, got some snickers out of me.

And seems the alcohol was strong enough to make Abby more forward than usual. I suppose is fitting, they both deserve a reward after getting rid of Ebon for now. I really liked seeing the girls get along so well with each other, it really shows they had a fun time even before the feeding time started.

I think Abby got it rougher than usual this time? At least since her first encounter with Nya. Poppy is related to a lot of stuff that I like so I really, really enojed this. I found it specially cute how she thought Abby was licking her because she liked that and just kept rubbing her around (or maybe inside? Was it inside?) her navel. The oni's breath, tummy, navel, sweat and other fluids might be something Abby hopes the alcohol makes her forget. Having the shrunken girl bite because the oni wouldn't feel any pain from it was clever.

And I guess Eve time is next. Though, she might want to bath Abby first, I can't imagine she appreciates how she smells now as much as Poppy. And also, yes, pain in for of headache is coming for Abby at this rate...

So yes, it was shorter than usual but really sweet! Poppy might be my second favorite by now, or even at the same level as Casey, have to think about it a bit more... The oni is just too adorable! and really has a lot of affinity with my tastes. I hope she come backs to te story sometime. Once more, I really enjoyed this, thanks for writing.

See ya.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review Kenta, I'm glad even though it was shorter than most of my other chapters it was still enjoyable. I have big plans on the upcoming chapters and I think you already figured out why. Props to you. XD 

I wouldn't worry too much about Poppy being rough. On a scale of one to Ebon, she got off rather easy.I'm also glad you enjoyed some Oni sweat. I figured a tomboy like her would need something along the lines. And yes, her face was in her navel.

I hope to update soon!

 

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