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Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2017 10:49 AM Title: Lover's, Quarrel

The argument between Casey and Eve was hilarious! I could see their personalities clashing. What shocked me was when Eve broke her sophisticated dialect when she said, " Don't piss me off, kid." To Casey. Cant wait to see Abby interact with the other girls in the cave! Awesome job again you two! P.S. I copy/pasted this review in case it gets deleted by accident again. ;)

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2017 4:39 AM Title: Lover's, Quarrel

Hey, really nice chapter, some new info but a lot more new doubts and expectation.

Eve again shows hew feelings for Abby, being mad with her at the start of the chapter and with Casey later on. Should've been really painful for her the whole incident with Ebon, specially not making it in time. Also, more focus on her being dead than before. I was thinking that maybe that's the way vampires appear? Rather than reproducing among them, transforming recently dead hominals or something like that. I'm eager to know about her past though it doesn't seem to be coming any time soon.

The whole discussion with Casey was fun, you two did a great job with that. I guess that shows that the dullahan has her own ways in which she excels. The whole "lovelorn" part should've hurt though

And well, even after what she did I still feel pretty bad for Ebon. The mention of her bringing back herbs each time, even if she didn't know if they helped, hurt me a bit. Her reasons for what she tried to do to Abby is something I'm really interested in.

Damn, Kari seems special. Kind of har to believe her problem after seeing the other girls being so open about getting energy. Also, I wonder how a shadow feels... Anyway, Casey holding Abby (L).

The whole feral thing sounds really dangerous. As Abby said, if they were to go on rampage it would be quite hard to protect the shrunken teenager from the, and Ebon. I did thought for a bit about her being used to feed the other but was unsure if taking so much energy from her would be fine or have any bad implications for her. But if Eve had the same idea then it should be fine I guess. Sounds a bit hard to think the she could be able to give energy to all of the girls but I suppose is more of an issue of efficency? Abby having a special "fuel" that she can't use but works wonders on the other girls, while stuff like food works better on hers. By the way, she wasn't mentioned but I suppose they're also hunting food for her? Though it shouldn't be much effort to feed someone the size of a doll. Also, I didn't think as far as befriending the other girls. I suppose they would fight for against Ebon for their source of nourishment but I wonder if they can make Abby see like more than that to them. Hopefully...

Eve brings more foreshadowing with the reasons that Najia's recovery is direr now and there being someone that hates humans more than Ebon. I guess that should be the hardest one around to deal with. I'm really curious to know who could it be.

And well, with that kiss I guess Eve is taking the lead in the race for Abby. I find Casery specially adorable but also like ve a lot. Wathever the result is between the three of them I hope they end up on a good note. I guess polygamy ain't an option with those two hominals involved? lol.

I'm really looking forward to see how this goes. This seems to be the start of the introduction of some other girls and getting to know them more and I'm really hyped about it.

See ya.



Author's Response:

Each of the girls will have more explained for them with time, don't you worry. Both Kari and Eve will have the proper introductions they deserve, and I promise you'll enjoy them. Najia ties into a lot of it though so I can't get into it just yet. ;)

I'm glad you enjoyed the fight scene. And then after the cat fight scene. XD

I was worried for awile on that one. It was pretty hard to do but F.W. and I kept at it each day and there was some hilarious results. :P

I'll try to go into the topic of food more later on. I know there's certain aspects I haven't delved into as much as I should have. So be patiant with me. :(

As for Eve taking the lead, I wouldn't say there is a definitive one at the moment. But, it is becoming apparent that Eve *liking* her might be a bit more then she first realized. Same goes for Casey after everything she heard between them. Also expect this to be touched up on as time goes on. :3

 

Thank you as always for the informitive and analytical review. They bring me great pleasure to break down and read. :)

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2017 7:41 AM Title: Lover's, Quarrel

Just wanted to let you know I liked this chapter, and the whole story in general. Abby is in for quite the ride, if she's going to be providing energy for the whole group. I wonder if they'll just gather everyone together and tell them about Abby that way, or if they'll introduce them to her individually, like has been happening. Anyway, I like where the story is going. Keep up the good work, both you and Franchise Writer!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your input. It really might not seem like it matters but it does to me. It makes me happy to know you like it and it's going as planned. :D Thank you for taking the time to say this Foreignkanto. I promise you the rides far from over, for both you, and for Abby :p

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