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Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2017 12:52 PM Title: Deeper than the surface,

I wrote a long heartfelt review before and the because I'm using my phone for the time being, so how it got deleted before I could even submit it. Anyways, enough of my woe-is-me crap. I see Eve isn't as could as I thought but it's still hard for me to determine her motives but that's what makes her such a interesting character. I like how Abby called her out on how she was apparently gonna kill Ebon, too. Abby is really starting to grow on me. (Wish she could literally grow on me haha!) Poor Brooke. Her past reminded me a bit of a scene from One Piece. The auction part thag is. Her argument with Abby was pretty silly lol. As always your chapters are amazing! :D P.S. I wished Frachise happy bday and didnt know how it got out that I knew! >:3



Author's Response:

Thank you for your words Nothingness. It really does make my happy to know you tried to review before. I got a little hurt that there wasn't many reviews for last chapter. I'm doing better now though so don't worry. I'll have something to show everyone soon don't worry. :)

 

Thanks for not snitching on me! >:3

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2017 2:26 AM Title: Deeper than the surface,

Is good to have a calm chapter after last one's actions. I think is more clear now what Eve's intentions are, she seriously feels something for Abby and won't let anyone get on the way. The way she took care of the pain for Abby should be more than enough proof, gladly it seems that won't have big consequences it seems. Also, I find it really cute when she's taken by surprise and end ups blushing.

But Brook is the start of the chapter. I really like her smug attitude, seems like an interesting adition to the story. Her powers are fascinating, I wonder to what extend she got control over the water and what else she can use it for. At least being able to transform her body into water is not something I remember seeing before, is nice to have some novelty. By the way, I think her entrance was cool.

I wasn't expecting her to tell about her past already, really sad what she had to go through. At least Najia was there and arrived before things turned to worst... I wonder why Eve didn't tell her about Abby taking care of her, though maybe she was simply in a hurry to get the energy she needed and didn't deem it necessary. Anyway, it seem Abby got herself another fan there.

Oh right, It was also quite fun to see Abby getting carried away by the younger girl. Is relaxing to have her back as new now that her injuries are a thing of the past.

I'll be looking forward to the next one.

See ya.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review Kenta. :)

I'll try having my next chapter up soon. Working on some details at the moment before I begin editing what I already have.

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