Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2017 9:17 AM Title: Curing the disease...

I dont even know if Ebon could be redeemable at this point. Obviously we could tell she's had an horrible experience with humans but the least she could have done was tell the girls to take Abby out of the cave. (Even though that would have still been bad.) After all, Abby was helping Naija. I couldnt even care to look at her caring side towards Ivy after that. I also owe Casey an apology lol. She might be hot headed and foulmouthed but she really is a sensitive person on the inside. I figured that out when Ebon mentioned she was a crying mess when Naija first took her in and man did Casey put up a fight! Eve appearance was more like one of an anti-heroine who was really protecting Abby for her own personal gains. I dont really trust her but thank goodness she came when she did. You and Franchise are doing excellent work here. I'm always looking for an update, it really is an amazing read. Oh and about the girl thing, I was only referring to KentaRyu because I saw he/she mentioned they fangirled in one of their reviews. Sorry for the misunderstanding lol.

Author's Response: Ahh that cleared it up a bit lol. Was a little confused there XD Ebon is an unusual case so I wouldn't condemn her until you know her tale. If they let a human leave knowing where they were she could go and get others to get rid of them. All sides should be considered, not just the ones you currently know about. :P I'm glad Caseys grown on you. I'm hoping all my characters will with time. As for Eve, expect her agenda to be known shortly. That's all I'll say for that. Thank you for the review Nothingness, you know how much they cheer me up. :D

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2017 4:06 AM Title: Curing the disease...

Pretty well done chapter, the action didn't stop and was easy to follow.

Still, there're quite some things to think about...

It was hurtful to see the girls trying her best to keep Ebon away from Abby and just failing, I guess that goes for showing the strenght between an A class and the others... Again, poor Nya... And poor everyone actually. They must feel devastated now, full of frustration.

We see some two sides of Ebon here, the one worried about Ivy and the one that hates humans. I guess she isn't as cold-hearted as she seemed at the start but I wonder how much of affection she feels for the other girls there... Or felt... It pained me a bit her last phrase before disappearing. I'm still unsure if is because of it meaning she doesn't want to have any relationship with the other girls or because of the state I pictured she had there, maybe a combination of both.

Some hints of Kari's past. I can't think much about what could it be, other than a human father (biological or not) bringing doom to her family.

And for Eve... Is hard to say. I guess that's why Casey and Kari were freaking out before, it shows the part of her personality they were talking about. I don't really think she was acting before with Abby though, I mean the parts in which she was "caught off guard" seemed natural but I guess is a possibility... Still, I think there're some points that prove that she isn't as bad they think, other than her love for Abby. I think the fact that she keeps the imps around is one for example, she doesn't seem to be inhumane, not knowing a better word, with them. And also the way she reasoned with Kari at the end and didin't just steal Abby from here. Though it could be argues there that it would be the method less dangerous to retrieve Abby. Anyway, I guess there'll be more of her soon.

As for the teenager herself, how she survived the fire is one thing to know, the other is why she asked Eve to spare Ebon. Is because of what Eve did to her? She didn't seem to fully agree with that so if that were the case maybe Eve didn't add specifical things to her.

Great chapter.

See ya.

Author's Response:

Well, there's plenty of curiosity in your words and I'll try to eleviate them as best I can, but not say to much. The power from the jump B to A is indeed a steep one which is why D to A was basically nonexistent with Ebon and Nya. You can tell now why there's only 7 A classified Monster species and not more. Even at adolesense they are fearsome indeed. The frustration is there, trust me it is, and there will be more to follow as the story goes on.

As for Ebon, her story has yet to be told so you'll see her true side with time, the same to her other half as well. As for her last statement, that will be shown to come the next few chapters. With Kari, I enjoy showing or hinting at things simply because its fun to know something other's don't. KAri will have her spotlight with time, don't worry. And you are right, her father does have something to do with her tragic past, keep thinking on it if you'd like.

As for Eve, don't worry to much about her. She will have some more time to show you her true self soon. There's a lot of things I can't say so I will just end it there.

And about Abby and her... excrusuating exposure to fire, that will be my little secret till the time is right. :P

 

Thank you as always for the review Kenta, I really do love when you take the time to analyze it like you have. It makes me all giddy to read your thoughts. :D

See ya soon!