[Report This]Date: April 02 2017 5:51 AM Title: No sense losing your head over it.
It seems you're keeping a good rythm with this story, I think you said this one might be longer than PLD, right?
Abby seems to be becoming more open minded now, after what happened last chapter and her talk with Casey. At the same time that also seems to be of help with her relationship with the other girls. She's doing way better now and younger ones also seem to be accepting her more. The way Najia is recovering should also help to earn their trust I think.
I love Casey more and more as the story develops. I find her attitude really adorable. I'm really looking forward to the next one, since it seems to have some more of her. As for what she had to do to save herself and Abby, I'm not sure if she's a quick thinker or just let the urge inspire her. I'm usually indifferent about that kind of content but I found it rather nice here for some reason, maybe because of the characters. Also, it was funny. Just for curiosity, would covering her in sand would also worked or wouldn't be effective enough? Also, it seems Casey has some control over her clothes, I wonder to what extend.
There's also the bit of sadness she showed in her conversation. I suppose the reason they all look up to Najia so much must be because she helped them in some way in the past. I think it'll be interesting know more of that in the future. And about the other girl, Ivy, which I might get and idea about how she's related to Ebon by the pictures.
See ya.
Author's Response:
Hmm, well it might be. I'm pretty sure it will have more chapters since it has many more characters but i believe the shorter chapters fit in better which allows me to post sooner then a month at a time xD.
As for Abby, things are changing for her, mostly by force but you'll see a natural progression with her with a couple of the upcoming chapters from now that will help ease her into their world.
I'm glad you love Casey, i'm trying to go for unique characters once again and writing for a Dullahan definitely has enabled me to do just that. xD
For your curiosity covering wouldn't eliminate smells but burying would. For a short time at least.
Expect some things to e revealed soon so shift the flow once again. I look foward to the next chapter greatly.
See ya. :)