Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2017 3:43 AM Title: From bad to worse...

Nice, another chapter.

I don't really know a thing about accent so I can't tell you much about that. I think I've heard some of those words in an irish video though, if it helps.

Anyway I love Casey's character, her dialogues and scenes were really fun. I'm really eager to know more about her. I wonder if there's a reason for Abby's attitude towards her being slightly different. I mean she's still scared and all but maybe she feels more at ease with her? Like, enought to talk back. She also tried to initiate a conversation with her, that's a first. Also Abby seems to have gotten a used to Nya, at least a bit.

Something I'm wondering, is there a reason why Casey wants her head to stay in place? Other than mixing up aming humans, which doesn't seems like she does much. I mean she has been like that her whole life so she should be used to it. Is it because of the twins?

And with the ending, Abby doesn't get a rest. Probably this will lead her to some serious thinking about her own kind. And it was really cute what Casey tried to do for help her, I'm liking her even more.

Will be waiting for the next one.

Author's Response:

Well it was an Irish accent I was attempting to write, so hopefully I did something right. :P

Casey will have more of her own experience's explained in the coming chapters so don't worry. As for her head staying in place... she has her reson's, i'll leave it at that.

I'll be updating soon, hopefully. I already started on chapter 6... hard to belive I just started this back up. xD

Thank you for the review Kenta :D