[Report This]Date: October 10 2016 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
Man, if I were Eli I would be most humiliated. Measuring him so casually, and constantly reminding him that he is soon to become so tiny, he'll be totally dependent upon his family to take care of him. And, the idea of filming him, (Slowly shrinking) and putting it on social media, has to be 'completely' dehumanizing too!
I'd like to see someone leave a 'review/request' - asking for something a bit more intimidating, ...like, forcing him to climb up winters bikini-clad body, (Only when he's down to about six inches tall) Using a thin piece of string for a rope, she could tie it off around her head like a headband and let hang all the way down to her bare feet. Eli could start off climbing up onto her foot, and then begin his ascent up mount Winter!
Author's Response:
It *is* YouTube, so I'm sure there will be all kinds of comments and suggestions. Luckily, Eli appears to have veto power, at least for now. From his perspective, he just wants enough money to get into Premoria.
Date: October 10 2016 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hm, so he's lost three inches since the beginning of the story. So, was he taller than 5' 4'' before the story even began? Or has he only lost three inches in height so far? It's a good story so far, though I look forward to the later stages.
Author's Response:
He started at 5'5" and has lost four inches so far. The later stages should indeed be interesting. :)
Date: October 10 2016 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 5
Aw, it feels bad seeing Eli slowly emasculated by his sisters, especially when he is going to be doll sized compared to them.
Author's Response:
He seems to be taking it in stride so far. TY for the review!