THe first chapter was rather questionable.  But after what the bear turned out to be lol.  Omg great chapter loved it!  Not sure about the next transformation, Kind of wished it would of been another toy.

Chapter two was so much better, though one was mostly an introduction to the story. Totally loved it. It reminds me of a body horror plot, really like those. Especially male male ones are even more horrific, especially for someone like Brandon. Poor quaterback becoming a body part of the one he made fun of and called pussy boy, even made fun about his small penis, haha that was awesome with the ending in this chapter to think about. Want to see more really now.

Thank you for your respons. I'm not a writer though, I have so many ideas. I can't concentrate to sit down, because of depression, it's really hard for me to focus on anything. Reading keeps me happy for some rare moments, and your stories are always one of my favorites. I can't wait to start reading when I saw you had written something new, and this story, truly said, is now my absolute favorite if yours. The surprise in chapter 2 was just breathtaking. I just loved how he at first just casually sat on his toy, I had this picture totally before my mind because how great you described it, with just the toys legs appearing hanging from below the chair at the back of the boys ass.

And then my favorite part totally was how he bulged his butt over the toy and then even spread his cheeks apart with his hands, lowering the gulping anus, I imagine it like a bulging fish mouth, slowly on the "screaming" toys mouth.

I love gross tf and humiliation the most, actually mm even more than fm, because I think theres nothing more humiliating If some straight guy gets "forced gay", and then especially unaware, the normal character casually used something, withouth a 2nd thought he was torturing someone.

Thats awesome news you had more chapters in mind! There are actually so many stuff which would be epic to read. For example the bully becoming a cum stain in the boys boxers after staying some time as his dick, and then the boxers became smelly laying on the ground because he used it as a cumrag for a week or two. How he always cleaned his slimy dick with it too, also smearing dick cheese in it, or even wiped a cum droplet away which inside his butt cheeck, and then the bully, totally already lost his "mind", wakes up the next day as the boys anus as the ultimate state of hell, especially when the nerd casually takes a morning dump or even more humiliting, in school. And he uses a dildo in the bullys "mouth" aka his anus, totally raping his throat with it. but the wors of course would be, the experience of him vomitting out a "giant" turd, with his sense of smell and taste. And I imagine his horrible disturbed and deformed "face", white, ill, frozen with a nightmarish experission.

Then the bully could become the roll of toilet paper in the school bathroom, and has the lovely final experience of all the boys in school wiping their asses with his "tongue" and flushing his awareness more and more away, some may even not flush.

These kind of tf are totally my favorite. Same with the sex doll idea, I like the idea of some totally straight jock becoming not ust a fleshlight (great tf idea too btw), but a sex doll... and then not just one, a female one, and then used by his best friends or the football team during the next school party, and his mind totally going from screaming to just laying there, as a broken object.

Thanks for writing back, love to review. This story is just the best so far. Thank you for this amazing plot. Read it now several times and it just gave me the thrills every single time. It's just how you made it so ... real. so vivid and believable. I can't imagine something more humiliating than this, for a totally straight guy, a jock who brags with how he banged chicks, and loved to bully the weak and especially gay guys. I loved how you made the nerds room look and how it gave the bully a gag reflex. The whole idea with the cat suit and the play, how he spoke... you just made it so real, not just a plot perspective, but also from a psychologic one.

How this toy totally was the stress relief toy for him, and his "best friend", telling him stories when coming from school.

Yeah...