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Reviewer: Jbaron Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2016 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

A really interesting story. I sincerely hope that new chapters are not too far away. : )

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2016 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Welcome back, writer ;)

Very good story indeed. Because I'm not nearly as good as a critic as tomspeedy, I will not write a very long review. I will only say that it felt like some action was missing from the story and it was about to begin as it ended.

Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the input, and you're welcome.  Actually, though, I planned it that way...  

Thanks for reading, Meereten ! 

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