[Report This]Date: October 07 2016 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 8 ... 10-6-16
Imagine if he did fall through. Down her shirt, while she's starting to sit with her pants down... oh a panty pervert too?
Amazing thus far. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
All fun ideas. Thanks a lot for commenting.
Date: October 07 2016 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 8 ... 10-6-16
Incredible!
Hope he'll revisit her mouth from his point of view :)
Author's Response:
That idea sounds tempting. The original mouthplay was just part of moving the story along. Thanks a lot for your comments.
[Report This]Date: October 07 2016 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 8 ... 10-6-16
Best part of this chapter is Addie saying she REALLY NEEDED to feel James between her big breasts. We now know a little more about her hidden desires and vulnerabilities.
Author's Response:
Yes, I like that line of dialogue, too. Thanks a lot for commenting.
[Report This]Date: October 06 2016 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 8 ... 10-6-16
My mom once told me about this thing called "the pencil test." Where the teenage girls of her generation would test their chest size by seeing whether or not a pencil would fall straight down through!
Well, I can't decide whether or not I want Jim to have that mixed blessing in the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I've previously given this one some thought, and I'd say the bra is tight enough and the boobs big enough that he's 'relatively safe' from falling. Thanks a lot for commenting.
[Report This]Date: October 06 2016 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 8 ... 10-6-16
Oh my dear god. Tiny Jedi, this chapter was fantastic. I love how teasing and clearly into it that Addie is, power and domination seem to come extremely naturally to her. You are doing a stupendous job, keep it up man! This story is easily one of my favorites on this website.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for your nice comments. Addie loves her power... and what she can do with it.