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Date: March 08 2018 9:42 PM Title: A Crushing Argument

On 3. A Crushing Argument

I’m not sure Biff should be described as a “man” when he’s not. He’s a boy. The girls are described as girls, and he’s a teen too, unless he was held back a few years.

I know about that impulsiveness–Trinidad's–all too well. Most of the time our closest friends just play along, but I’m glad Biff didn’t get crushed.

Author's Response:

Very good point about the words. These are old children, not adults yet. That was exciting for me to write about when I was a few years older than that, but it worries me now. Still, the show must go on, and as it does I have to pay attention to word choice and double standards.