Date: September 14 2016 6:01 PM Title: Some More Compression
hi, Sorry for late review, I've been meening to comment on your stories since the early weeks of the size discord but i kept getting side tracted by work and school, and general laziness. Waiting for ispiration is quite the pitfall. But I do plan to get through the stoires of realitively soon. Anywho I registered an account just or the sake of reviewing, creative types do need encouragement. First of all I like your scearios and your focus on keeping all the interactions giantess foccused. That can be hard to do with shrinking since it makes giant guys exist by defualt. it really muddies my enjoyment of shrink stories when they mix both giant girls and guys into the plot/ interaction. it de sexyfies the story for me and turns it generic.
overall I find the main character someone I can really empathise with, the way she tries to keep to herself and make herslef as low key as possible, avoid the eye contact, cliques, any dense social areas. Maintaining that critical balance of appearing neither overtly friendly or unfriendly. Its all the same way I handeled school. I certianly had aspects about myself I couldnt change and made dame sure to keep them hidden. The social/cyber bullying is unavoidable. Classmates can definetely be bitches and screw you in the back if give them oppening to. I could totally see myself being born a Shrinker. Does the mian chracter have a name by the way?
My favorite chapter is definetly 2, for one reason the realtively innocent betrayel by her curious nerdy friend was cute. its escpecially fun becuase them having an existing relationship made the impact and himliation more personal. I will say youre directly responsible for making me heavily into feet again.
Theres some minor grammar conlficts i bumped into but nothing major. In chapter 2, paragrahp 1, line 2 , it goes something like "she didnt have many friends so she tried "not" to keep me around" it seems like nerdy girl "wants" to keep her around becuse shes IS lonley.
Also chp 2 , paragraph 2, line 2, the line goes something like "the library was safe place"at" "during" lunch time. " it seems like you only need one or the other. Thats all. im not a writer though.
Date: July 24 2016 9:32 AM Title: Studying
This was a really cool chapter. I liked the tied to the pencil thing. I don't think I've seen anyone do something with that idea. And I think the concept to your story is pretty cool too. Glad to see you back from your semi-long hiatus!
Date: June 13 2016 6:08 AM Title: Some More Compression
Good stuff. The idea of an app being used to shrink those who are compatible with it is a fun one and easily allows you to dip into the action without having to explain too much beyond that this is just the speaker's norm. It was smart to open with an anonymous interaction, as it emphasizes how casually anyone can do this to her, and the second chapter was amusing for poking fun at giantess porn dialogue. Curious where you're going next with this.
Date: June 11 2016 3:24 AM Title: Some More Compression
Great so far. Loved the foot torture, but definitely want to see other girls find other ways to torture the protagonist though. Being sat on for a whole class would be a good one.
I'm not really into butt crush, sorry.