Something I've noticed about Jessica these past few chapters and actually in this new "retelling" of the story is that she is surprisingly quick to anger and quick to contemplate violence. How many times has she bullied someone with her size because of some offense or thought about killing them for a minor quip or something along those lines? Not a good character quality for someone trying to fit-in among normal society.

Anyway, decent chapter. I'm still not sure where you're taking this story, to be honest I feel as if it's not really going anywhere if you catch me. What's the point of making Cait and Jess friends? Is Jess and Jack even gonna be a thing, it doesn't seem like it. If not are you gonna introduce some other guy character for Jess to get with? I don't know. It's not clear where any of these relationships are going. Or where this this story is going for that matter... It's still fairly enjoyable to read but I wish there was a more clear goal or something in sight.