Reviews For Uptown Girl
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Reviewer: versusterminus7 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2016 12:26 AM Title: Taking Stock

I'm still not over how top notch your writing at the beginning of the chapter feels.

Great stuff, nostory!

Author's Response:

 Thanks man, it feels great to hear you say this!

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2016 11:07 AM Title: Taking Stock

Looks like Jessica found a job! But I agree, a million dollars seems a bit on the low side. She should have requested a percentage of the sales on top. Would give her incentive to improve at modeling.



Author's Response:

Hey thanks for the review!

 

I've read other stories where the giantess, standing hundreds of feet tall gets paid easily an eight to nine figure sum for basically her first ever modelling job. I think its unrealistic to get so much and well, I think food might be cheaper if you buy in bulk. I also think a million dollars for your first job is a pretty big sum as it is, what with the clothes thrown in and stuff. Then there is the fact she got free clothes to wear. 

She may get increments, provided she sparks a spike in sales. It may be a bit early to request fof a percentage of sales but I could see that happening if the job works out. 

 

 

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