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Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2016 9:48 AM Title: Its Only A Model

Jessica underestimates the value she could provide in a job. There are plenty of fields where her unique talents would come in handy. Excavation, construction, and demolition are just a few that come to mind. Given that she'd be replacing many men and machines in those areas, she could easily earn enough to feed herself. You read about such giant machines like the Bagger 288. It cost 100 million to build and 10 million every time they want to move it to another location. She could save those companies loads of money.



Author's Response:

Hey thanks for the review! I think that's a very good point, her hands could easily move the earth with more precision than some of the machines currently used she  could negotiate for a high salary given the manpower saved and other costs like moving it. Its one way she could earn it, I've thought of a few more where her talents could be put to good use. Right now she'd underestimate herself because she's now forced to survive in the outside world where the average person is smaller than her finger, she's still finding her feet at the moment. 

Reviewer: YesStory Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2016 10:08 PM Title: Its Only A Model

Hmm... I'm kind of bored with Jessica soooo, if you can, make a different series like a evil giantess destroying the world or something else. Danke.

Author's Response:

I've thought of doing a story like that, try something different but my writing schedule is just packed; after I finish these two stories, its another story for Intersizables, this series and BFG. Maybe if I ever find myself with some time between stories. 

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2016 11:39 AM Title: Its Only A Model

Haven't had a chance to comment yet but I've been enjoying this story. I love the idea of a giantess trying her best to live among normal people, with all the challenges, prejudices, and awkward situations that entails. I'm curious what sort of job Jessica will apply for and how she will try to fit in society.



Author's Response:

Oh wow, its an honour to have you review this story! Thanks for it! That's the gist of this story and any sequels to it, Jessica trying to live her life as a giant among men. Oh you'll see that soon...even a giantess must work to put food on the table. I love writing all this, thinking how would being a giant affect a person's life,  all the changes one would need to make to live a normal life. 

Reviewer: versusterminus7 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2016 8:03 PM Title: Its Only A Model

I love this chapter- its so revealing on both sides of the aisle and it reveals more and more about Jessica and Caitlin (tho i still think Caitlin ought to be squished). 

Excellent stuff, Nostory!



Author's Response:

All it takes is once little accident, Jessica shifting her butt when Caitlin gets too close and she'll be a stain while Jessica gets herself a little man all to herself :D

I kid, I don't think Jessica would ever do that sort of thing. Thanks for all the help ! 

Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2016 12:37 PM Title: Its Only A Model

Was nice to see Jessica and Caitlin interacting like that, it was surprisingly civil, all things considered. And again, while I like Jess, Caitlin brought up some good points: if she eats enough to feed a city that's costing Jack and his family a fortune! She can't really afford to just sit around. Even if she gets a job that pays very little, at least she can feel good that she's trying to be independent! Another good chapter, looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Good points but Caitlin may not be accurate in all her fact reporting but the figure she uses is somewhere in that ballpark. I like the idea of Jessica working, it would help to reduce net spending and that's only for food! Thanks for the review!

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