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Reviewer: tjnova Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2016 7:45 PM Title: Crossing the Line

Oh my I love it!

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2016 1:47 PM Title: Crossing the Line

What a sweet, odd, and amazing chapter all in one. The description of how Jojo lost himself in his lust for Daisy's feet was great. I find myself very much hoping for a continuation once again. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

Well I do have ideas for more stories with these two. Now whether I do them or not who knows. Either way, I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: versusterminus7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2016 11:01 AM Title: Crossing the Line

I really like the ending paragraphs- they really highlight some of the difficulties of daisy and jojos relationships. How things taken apart can't be put back in place. Really great writing, asterisk. Hope to see even more from you.

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot. I do enjoy writing these two a fair amount. Glad to hear other people find their dichotomy interesting as well.

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