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Reviewer: bailey69 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2017 2:01 PM Title: A Pet's Life

this was a very bad read,was this teddy a dog,cat or a pet rat you can't tell what he is ,I did'nt like because there's nothing to the story,no plot or story line .   I can't rate it because there's no story

Author's Response:

This was what he wanted. He very specifically wanted a story about nothing. Just a bit of size with someone treated like a pet lol

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Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2016 3:36 PM Title: Her Little Princess

Any chance that there will be more chapter featuring Ashley & Tina?

Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2016 6:15 PM Title: Her Little Princess

This story is amazing! Everything about it is prefect! The girl on girl foot worship, the sister/sister incest, the humiliation especially the panty sniffing ) the description of Ashley's sweaty soles! Just perfect! Please, more chapters with Tina & Ashley! 

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2016 5:02 PM Title: Her Little Princess

Another great job done by Asterisk.I love how you just take my simple ideas and make a story.

@Jacksmith i know what you mean about the relationship development, I wanted to put some in but decided to just focus on the moment. Also the financial domination is greatly under used here so I thought It was a good idea to bring it in.

Hopefully we will see more from these sisters soon.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2016 4:17 PM Title: Her Little Princess

Best chapter yet.

Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2016 4:06 PM Title: Her Little Princess

That was pleasant. I had been hoping to see a followup to that first chapter. Admittedly I liked the first one a bit more because it focused on the development of the sisters' relationship, but I know you're just following a commission guideline, and it was still a nice bit of domination. Interesting also to essentially see softcore financial domination show up.

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2016 11:19 AM Title: Solemates

I keep rereading this story and am in awe how it turned out! I love it so much! I gotta think of a sequel now for when commissions open again someday!!!

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2016 2:39 PM Title: Just Between Us

Ive read this story over and over again thinking of more ideas.I love these characters and would love to keep useing them in the future. I loved the dialogue.

one of the things that i didnt not clarify to asterisk was the use of the word princess over the word mistress. mistress seemed a little to older for me.Tho i did like that the bratty side showed more than her mean side.A playful bratty is what i was looking for and i got that.

Asterisk is a great author and did so much for me in this story

Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2016 7:17 AM Title: Just Between Us

It's definitely a familiar premise, but you write the interactions in an enjoyably natural way, and the quickly changing relationship of the sisters is great too. I was happy that the story ended without her just outright stomping and murdering Tina; conclusions like those always pull me out. My one criticism is that Ashley's dialogue sort of suggested the voice of one a little bit older than you labeled her, but that's about it. Solid work here!

Author's Response:

Thanks! The age was something of a weird thing for me because I initially started writing them a tad older, but upon revisiting the commission's message I realized that I misread the request so I had to make some hasty changes. Still, I'm happy to hear you liked it!

Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2016 3:10 PM Title: Reconnecting

I enjoyed the scenario and setup, and the shrinking and foot play. Especially lugged that there were 2 shrunken women and a little love triangle. However not so much into the crush/death/snuff stuff, so skipped those bits. The rest I loved! 

Author's Response:

That's all on the person who requested the story. I just did as they wanted

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2016 9:21 AM Title: Running Blind

Excellent story.

Reviewer: sok06 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 1:46 AM Title: Just Between Us

the first one is amazing. 

Reviewer: cpgrad08 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2016 9:12 PM Title: Just Between Us

What is your rates for commissions?

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Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 14 2016 4:52 PM Title: Just Between Us

Amazing story! This was everything I ever wanted: sisters, shrinking, humiliation, amazing foot worship scenes, sweat, scent and foot wear!

More like this please! 

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