Date: July 18 2016 1:05 PM Title: Morning Routine Pt. 1
Well done! Can't wait till the next part
[Report This]Date: May 27 2016 10:06 PM Title: Morning Routine Pt. 1
Oh, boy. This story is exploring some of my very own thoughts. Good on you and my appetite is whet. Super excited!
[Report This]Date: May 27 2016 10:06 PM Title: Morning Routine Pt. 1
Oh, boy. This story is exploring some of my very own thoughts. Good on you and I my appetite is whet.
Date: May 10 2016 2:07 PM Title: Morning Routine Pt. 1
Is this series going to be continued? Its a very interesting concept and enjoyable to read :)
Author's Response:
Yes it will, I've been a bit busy so the writing slowed down a bit. I should be getting out another chapter tomorrow though.
Date: May 03 2016 9:35 PM Title: Morning Routine Pt. 1
Interesting tags, I doubt though this story will be continued. Surprise me for the better.
Author's Response:
I shall :)
Date: May 03 2016 4:40 PM Title: Morning Routine Pt. 1
The premise sounds interesting, but this chapter was WAY too fast. Try to pace it a little more, whether through more description of the situation, more details in the action, or some combination of both.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, when I was writing this, it had felt like to me that I was actually writing too slow and drawing out things longer than I should've, so this is interesting to hear. Chapter 2 is already written so there isn't going to be any change there, but I'll see what I can do with your suggestions for the third chapter. I can't 100% promise anything though, as I have a bit of difficulty with changing my writing habits. I'll try though :)