Giantess World
Reviews For The Incursion
Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 3:15 PM Title: Chapter II
Author's Response: You're onto something here, Stubbornstain. Chapter three will take care of some of the variables. Thanks for your suggestions. Putting them into effect right now. Thanks, and keep it up!
Date: April 25 2016 3:15 PM Title: Chapter II
That was cute. It's cute that they have to use something other than words to really communicate with each other. And it makes it more believable if they can't understand each other verbally. After all, they likely don't share a language.
Author's Response: You're onto something here, Stubbornstain. Chapter three will take care of some of the variables. Thanks for your suggestions. Putting them into effect right now. Thanks, and keep it up!
Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 8:39 AM Title: Chapter II
Author's Response: If it has your attention, I'll definitely keep writing! Thanks!
Date: April 25 2016 8:39 AM Title: Chapter II
I hope to see more, this story has gotten my attention!
Author's Response: If it has your attention, I'll definitely keep writing! Thanks!