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Reviewer: lord of fire 3000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2007 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 9: The Game

i like the way the story is going, hope u add more chapters

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: Vito Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 06 2007 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 9: The Game

Good Writing, needs an ending.

Author's Response: I don't know how to end it just yet.

Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2007 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 9: The Game

This has been my favorite chapter by far. I love how despite her being quite evil, the relationship seems to be taking on an understanding. Poor Amber though, she's the kind of girl who other people have to help a bit and unfortunately that kinda girl usually ends up with the kind of guy who takes advantage of her appreciation for everything she's lucky enough to be given. I'm really enjoying this story and hope you continue it. Thank you!

Author's Response: thanks alot. I enjoy reading reviews like this.

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