[Report This]Date: April 02 2016 2:53 AM Title: How it all Began
Have I commented on this story yet?
It's really good. I've always been a fan of the GTS fantasy stories here. I honestly have to admit though, that on paper, it does nothing particularly different so far, but it's held off on enough plot details to keep me interested. Personally, I wish the chapters were longer, but that's selfish of me. And also, I thought the general tone of the story would be a little less kind to the main character and eventually add more character development for Alexandra, but this tone works too. Good read so far, looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it. I never really set out to do anything out there or unique, but don't worry. Alex gets more characterization as it goes along. In a way the story is the Protagonist coming to understand her. As for chapter length, well that's just how I am haha. I prefer brevity over text dumps. Though even these chapters are 3 - 7 pages each.
Date: March 31 2016 4:06 AM Title: How it all Began
I didn't expect Alexandra to be so open with him, it feels like a husband-wife relationship only one side is way more dominant than the other. I hope to see more, this is a wonderful story!
Date: March 12 2016 10:18 AM Title: How it all Began
I like this story, the giantess is not exactly likable but I am keen to see more of her!
[Report This]Date: March 06 2016 4:44 AM Title: How it all Began
Interested in seeing where this goes.
Date: February 26 2016 10:11 PM Title: How it all Began
I'm definitely interested to see where this story goes from here.
[Report This]Date: February 26 2016 3:40 PM Title: How it all Began
Intriguing! Very intriguing. I really hope to see more of this.
[Report This]Date: February 26 2016 2:11 PM Title: How it all Began
Intriguing! Count me in for chapter 2.
P.S.---I had a magician character by the same name in one of my interactive chapters @ Writing.com. Nice to see that great literary minds think alike. :-)