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Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2016 12:17 AM Title: Losing the Clothes

I like the 3 chapters to get this story off the ground. I don't have anything questions besides. What is the guys name? And looking forward to what's next.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. The guy would not know his name because he has no memory when he wakes up in the forest. I was thinking about changing the story to be in second person so that his name would just be the readers name.

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