[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 8:59 AM Title: Flat
Awesome chapter! I wonder if mike will find his way home... (; and I like how you introduce these side characters only for a brief period of time, I must say Jen is my favorite among the sisters right now! Keep up the great work! Till next time, cheers!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I like to keep my stories confined to one area (unless the main plot is that it's across multiple areas). so just saying now he definetly will get back home....Whether that is with Molly or not, and how for that matter, that remains to be seen!
Date: February 27 2016 6:21 AM Title: Flat
Loved this chapter! I was not expecting Molly to get some action. I hope Molly's coworker starts sweeping the floor after he gets free from Jens nail polish that would be epic. Cant wait for the next chapter and hopefully it comes soon!
Author's Response:
Fun Fact! This chapter was originally going to be longer. Don't worry, I didn't remove any content, stuff was just supposed to happen after where this one finished (hence the [kinda] aprupt ending). The main reason I just put this up "unfinished" was because I was writing it at like 1am, and when I got here, I thought of like five different things that could happen next, so I just put it up since I didn't have anything in some time, and would figure out what occures later. Funny though, because your idea is one of the things I was thinking of. I guess we'll find out soon enough what happens.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 12:32 AM Title: Flat
One thing that might happen? He could meet the "missing" Thomas.
Author's Response:
Thomas is, well, gone at this point. But this story is happening just a few days after my previous one. I'll just say I have a plan of where I'm going with this.