Date: February 22 2016 9:50 AM Title: Polish
Another great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks!!! By the way, I love your name.
Date: February 20 2016 11:10 PM Title: Polish
Just a fantastic chapter overall. Now im imagining Jen going to a toe-nail salon and our protagonist being held underater, rubbed all over feet and hands and lotioned and barely surviving an encounter with toe nail clippers with an unaware salon worker looking very closely the entire time. Please write about this if you could squeeze it into the story-arc at all! great work.
Author's Response:
I guess we'll find out together what happens. Most of this story is already planned out in my head, but there's room for other stuff. Thanks for the comment regardless!
Date: February 20 2016 10:40 PM Title: Polish
Love this chapter!! I eagerly await each chapter. I cant wait to see if Jen puts on her scuffed up heeled boots for a smelly prision or sandles. the boots would be an interenting chapter though. Hope the next update comes soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks!! I guess we'll have to see what comes after, but it might not be where you expect! Or maybe it is?
[Report This]Date: February 20 2016 6:37 PM Title: Polish
Still not "polished" off, huh?
Durable little guy, isn't he?
Author's Response:
I hope I "painted" a good picture with this chapter. It'd be no fun if he died or broke his legs ten seconds into the story. It's just a series of coincidental and lucky, but entierly plausible events.
[Report This]Date: February 20 2016 5:19 PM Title: Polish
This was hands down one of the best chapters I've ever read in my life!! Wow! The detail is amazing, it left me begging for more, you sir are truly gifted. I'm a huge unaware fan, and this chapter and story is right up my ally. Please keep this going, I feel as if I should pay for this story that's how good it is! Once again keep up the amazing work, I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
Why thank you!! This chapter was one I always liked the idea of, and wished there was more of, but it just wasn't that common. That's why I had to do it! Don't worry there's still probably about...at least six more chapters. That's a minimum too I'm still not 100% sure of everything exactly.