[Report This]Date: February 19 2016 10:24 AM Title: Chores
This chapter was amazing! I'm loving the detail you put into each one. 1st we get mikes POV then we get one of the sisters POV then the overall POV (kinda like a narrator) keep up the great work, this is one of the if not the best unaware story on this site right now! I'm a big fan, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really appreciate the comments and support! I always enjoy doing comparison POVs like that because it gives a nice sense of the magnitude of their actions. Like for the sister's it's just a simple mundane action, but it's hell for Mike, and that's what I enjoy so much! Thanks again!
Date: February 17 2016 8:14 PM Title: Chores
Nice chapter! I liked the laundry part and I liked Leslie doing it. Great chapter overall. Are you going to Jen do something like unkowingly do something??? Like Jen doing some sort of chore or something?? But good story overall.
Author's Response:
Oh don't worry, Jen will be doing something in the very, very near future.
[Report This]Date: February 17 2016 8:03 PM Title: Chores
Oh, brother! If this doesn't kill him, nothing will. On the bright side, however, at least he was pre-shrunk when he went in the wash!
Author's Response:
That was the best joke I've heard all week, and I am ashamed I didn't think of it. I have disappointed myself, and now I feel the need to add puns in every chapter no matter how forced.