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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2016 10:18 AM Title: Family

@cpgrad08: It's probably that reverse-h syndrome that seems to be unique to Cockney English. For example: "An air conditioner is what you spray on your air to keep it from blowin' about in the breeze caused by the hair conditioner!" ;-)

Author's Response:

I also have a weird tendency to add the letter "e" to the end of words and I'm not sure why. But I usually always catch myself doing that. I think it's because in Russian one of the cases adds an "e" (pronounced 'ye') to the end of some words. 

Reviewer: cpgrad08 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2016 9:50 PM Title: Family

ANother great chapter? Will this story by fully unaware like the last one? ALso yo got a typo, you have the word hair instead of air when talking about Jen's boot.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Yeah, pretty much anything I ever write will be unaware. It's pretty much the only thing I care about. And thanks, sometimes I type these really fast and I just type things I don't mean.

Reviewer: GuyGoneSmall Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2016 7:52 PM Title: Family

Keep it up!  I loved this chapter.  Would love to see more with Jen she would be a good challenge for Mike to get the attention of.  Or Leslie, what about Leslie wearing her Keds around the house along with Jen wearing her heeled boots?  That would be awesome to read about.  



Author's Response:

Thanks!! I guess we'll have to see what comes next, but the "action" does begin next chapter! (I already know what happens hehe)

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