[Report This]Date: December 29 2015 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Nightmare Begins
I hope my first review didn't offend you. I didn't mean it in a nasty way, I do in fact believe this story is amazing so far and I can't wait to read more. I was just implying that there are people on here who purely come on to read shrinking and giantess stuff, and they don't appreciate a good storyline like this. I think you've listened and rectified all of this by adding the dreams that Jumko is having.
Excellent and unique story for sure, can't wait to read some new chapters.
Date: December 28 2015 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Forbidden Act
It's really good just do what you do ..... Like its a story I would read in my normal reading list just because it has a interesting premise and great character development
Date: December 27 2015 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Forbidden Act
Loving this story so far it seems amazing, Keep up the good work
Date: December 26 2015 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Forbidden Act
Id advise you not to care too much about people saying you arent going fast enough. This build-up seems excellent and youre really building an interesting world. Great quality writing, will be keeping a close eye on this one!
Author's Response:
A large part of this story will focus on a full grown Jumko as he struggles to come to terms with his fate to be shrunken and eaten and none of his friends or family seem interested to help him out. I need a few chapters of development to make every charcter's actions seem believable.
Date: December 25 2015 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Forbidden Act
This concept seems really good, but just bare in mind this is giantess world. People will get bored of your story if there is no shrinking any time soon, which there doesn't seem to be.
Author's Response:
I've added to the story notes detailing that this story is split into 3 acts. The first act will focus on Jumko preparing for the ritual and fighting. This act also contains a lot of important character development and helps to explain the religion and culture of the universe. The second act will focus on Jumko struggling to come to terms with his fate to be shrunken and the reactions of his friends and family. The third and final act will focus on a shrunken Jumko as he is prepared to be eaten.
I'm trying to do something unique here where the story focuses on a full grown character as he knows he is about to be shrunken and nobody will help him. I haven't seen any stories written from this perspective. The last few chapters will contain lots of interaction between shrunken men and normal sized women.