[Report This]Date: January 12 2017 2:29 AM Title: For you, My Dear
Your stories always jumpstarts my imagination. Itching for more from this series! Hopefully the origins of the Giants and a more detailed description of the destruction when they first arrived will unfold later in the story. One of the best!
Author's Response:
Thanks man! I'm hoping to get another chapter out soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks man! I'm hoping to get another chapter out soon.
Date: December 23 2016 8:46 AM Title: For you, My Dear
Really got a lot of potential here, when you get back on it I'll review and shout as you update
Author's Response:
Awesome sounds good man!
[Report This]Date: August 05 2016 7:40 PM Title: In the Hands of the Living God
Damn.
Author's Response:
Damn? As in 'wow' or...? I'll take it as a compliment.
[Report This]Date: March 17 2016 2:08 AM Title: My Refuge and My Fortress
I still enjoy reading this story and apologize for not being more frequent with my reviews.
I can't wait to see how these characters develop as this tale progresses.
aaron
Date: January 17 2016 5:50 PM Title: For you, My Dear
Still find Tryn to be a very perplexing character, she wants to find the humans but what will she do with them after she finds them? They won't be trespassing in that case, she will be the intruder. For food maybe?
Date: January 15 2016 6:54 PM Title: Down in the Ash
I have to say, this guy constantly referancing god is kind of peeving me. I think that if he were to ever have a conversation about his god with this giantess it wouldn't go very well for him. At best she would just laugh it off.
Author's Response:
That's sort of my intentionwith him. Unlike the last sorry I'm really hoping to make everyone hate all the characters in this one, for a specific purpose
Date: January 11 2016 12:39 AM Title: For you, My Dear
I like the interaction between Enoch and Tryn and I definitely would like to see more.
Date: January 09 2016 4:54 PM Title: And We Tremble
Not much to say, exept that I enjoyed the interaction in this chapter. I'm wondering if maybe you aren't really that interested in this series as these chapters are quite a bit shorter than the ones in Mask of the Gods
Your description dose make me wonder about the gianesses home. Has she built a home out of mudbrick or something? That's the picture I had in my head.
It also leaves me wondering what she has planned for the little people.
Anyway, if you decide to do the super hero story, I'd rather an original character.
Date: January 08 2016 11:00 PM Title: The Pit and the Price
To me its clear Tryn is more complex than she lets on. She has some concerns over how Soren views her and also, she is hurt he seemingly forgot her name. Why all that? Does she like him in any way? Perhaps she is alone and wants some companionship because so far all she gets is intruders.
I think you should focus on their relationship, it is the most interesting part of the story to me.
Date: January 08 2016 9:12 PM Title: The Pit and the Price
Good story so far. Tryn is an oddball like Vera, it doesn't seem like she's pure evil or anything but it of course, she isn't a saint either, I get the feeling she'll kill someone without a second thought. Anyway, I'm going to be keeping up with this story now that we have a giantess in it which is what I was waiting for before jumping in any further.
Date: January 08 2016 6:03 PM Title: The Pit and the Price
Just my luck, finally this story seems to have a direction and its getting back burnered lol
Date: January 05 2016 8:58 PM Title: And We Tremble
Not much to say, exept that I enjoyed the interaction in this chapter. I'm wondering if maybe you aren't really that interested in this series as these chapters are quite a bit shorter than the ones in Mask of the Gods
Your description dose make me wonder about the gianesses home. Has she built a home out of mudbrick or something? That's the picture I had in my head.
It also leaves me wondering what she has planned for the little people.
Anyway, if you decide to do the super hero story, I'd rather an original character.
Author's Response:
Cool, thanks for the feedback! And yeah, I'm not as into this one as Masks, partially because I don't know what I want to happen and simply because the more I write for the new giantess the more I feel like I might end up writing another character just like Vera, which is not what I want at all. I will keep up with it but it will be sparser. Its also because I have quite a few other writing projects going on right now that keep distracting me. Nevertheless I will not give up on this story.
Date: January 04 2016 9:44 PM Title: For you, My Dear
Awesome, so long as you finish it.
Date: January 04 2016 8:37 PM Title: And We Tremble
I really want you to continue from here, regardless of the review count because right now, I really want to know what happens from here because the titaness is keen to find where these humans are from AND she has territory carved out. I really really want to know more about here.
However if you do try the superhero one instead, I suggest an original character. Gives you room to play with. Need not be a giant woman but a man whose super power is shrinking.
Author's Response:
Very true, I probably will keep up with thus one, but it may be more infrequent
Date: January 02 2016 1:39 AM Title: And Behold a White Horse
I would not want you to stop right here, this is one of the best ongoing stories right now. That titaness may show to Soren that not all of them are beasts.I liked chapter 2, it showed to me at least that some of the titans have settled in, not just wandering around like nomads to wreak havoc on humans.
[Report This]Date: January 01 2016 11:49 PM Title: And Behold a White Horse
Really hope you don't end on this chapter because I'm very much so enjoying this story. However, it is your choice to do so.
I personally would rather read more about this titaness even though a wonder woman-esque giantess story sounds very intriguing.
aaron
Date: December 24 2015 11:17 AM Title: For you, My Dear
Not much interaction but a nice start nonetheless. I prefer gentle giantess stories. I'm not sure there's room in your mythose to support that given what you've set up in the previous story but apparently there are all sorts. Maybe some of them have come to like us puny humans.
The situation in your stories kind of reminds me of a world I've been dreaming up. But aside from the ones who are just going around murdering everything in sight there are also some who set up there own personal fiefdoms. There is a conflict between the two groups because the destroyers keep killing off all the masters potential servants.
Anyway, I look forward to your next part.
Date: December 22 2015 9:43 AM Title: For you, My Dear
So there's already sighting of a giant, looking like it does not want to be here anymore than our lead does. Good start and that was fast , getting this out so soon after your last story ended!
Date: December 22 2015 1:00 AM Title: For you, My Dear
Great! I'm excited for this one although I gotta say that part of the mysterious allure of the first story is not here simply because we have a good amount of information about this universe already. I'm also hoping maybe we get more GTS content in this one besides flat out killing or long conversations.
The first one only had that one chapter where Vera was drugged but your handling of the interactions was masterful and I thought it was a shame not to have more chapters like that. I'm not necessarily saying it has to be 'sexy' content but a bit more interation between gts and humans would help suppliment the big mysteries that the first one had to keep reader attention.