Reviews For The First Born
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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 04 2007 12:19 PM Title: Chapter Twenty: Solutions and Problems

Methinks it's "frying-pan-to-fire" time. ;-)

Reviewer: billyevil Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2007 9:32 PM Title: Chapter Twenty: Solutions and Problems

Interesting. I wonder if the girl intends to mix it in with Emma's food and shrink her as well. Being stuck in that pouch without anyone knowing where he's gone is going to make escape difficult. Especially if something happens to Emma.

Author's Response: We are getting near the end of this tale, but a few twists are still in store. I'm glad to see you still reading after all these chapters. I hope you are still enjoying it as much as the first.

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