Reviews For The First Born
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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2007 12:10 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen: There is no try, only do or do not!

Uniform? Is she a parochial school girl or a cheerleader?

Reviewer: Doom Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2007 4:05 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen: There is no try, only do or do not!

Ah, and now the story shifts up a gear!

Author's Response: Yup, and i am hoping to get the next chapter done this weekend.

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