Reviewer: hertinypal Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2007 11:36 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen: Finding your own way

Glad to see the change.It seems to help make the read easier! You are alwasy getting better man.

As to this chapter...I like that things are going to get back to normal for the family...haha sort of, Well for most of them anyways. It is jac that is going to need to adjust to the changes in his world ...even if pouty little ally is the reson for all his troubles. Hes going to have to learn to bite his tongue around her when he finds out she made him that way!!!!  ( or maybe he wont??)